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Piano Keys

I crave your ivory touch on my fingertips as I feel my way out of this darkness into the world of melodic sound.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/13/2023 2:59:00 AM

Just thinking of you....it's been a while. Hope you are well and finding what you want out of life!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 4:47:00 PM

I’ve been well! Trying to do what I love, trying to keep the darkness at bay, and hopefully succeeding. Hope you are well also. I always appreciate your visits <3

James Peranteau

Date: 7/28/2023 5:38:00 PM

my dear poet, if yourn slide 'pon 'mine' "ivory" ...ohhh the notes! need i go on ;)....much love, james

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 4:47:00 PM

<3 love it! ~Laura

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/7/2023 8:23:00 PM

Love this simply amazing masterpiece

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 4:47:00 PM

Thank you so much (: <3

Michael Alexander

Date: 5/23/2023 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful description. Simple, yet profound in a single verse!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/23/2024 4:48:00 PM

Thanks so much Michael! Means a lot to me <3

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/22/2023 4:26:00 PM

Ahh!! Music. It is indeed a pleasure for us and nice that you talk about it as being a means to sort out your feelings. BTW, I have been listening to OM by the Moody Blues lately. I do love the harmony and fullness of the sound. A second BTW, your words are like music!! It is a sweet insight into a moment in your life.

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/23/2022 2:12:00 PM

Your fingertips favor the fire touch of freedom...your fingertips are the mouth of rare love...Justin

John Watt

Date: 12/22/2022 5:55:00 PM

Playing music got me through many dark days, from teenage angst to relationship sorrows, to loss of loved ones, and anxiety about the future. I feel like I can relate to this one, Laura. Thanks for sharing and congrats on your worthy POTD selection. I wish you many hours of satisfying piano playing in your future ~ John

Valsa George

Date: 12/22/2022 6:04:00 AM

Music has such therapeutic effect and it opens up the inlets of joy in us. Congratulations Laura on your POTD

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:03:00 AM

To be real with you, music kept me alive! I appreciate your kind words, Valsa. ~Laura

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/21/2022 6:12:00 PM

Music is one way to create a beautiful mood, while lingering in a world of darkness. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Laura, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:04:00 AM

Thank you Brandy. Your words mean a lot to me! ~Laura

Charles Messina

Date: 12/21/2022 5:40:00 PM

Awesome verse, Laura. Congratulations on POTD!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:04:00 AM

Thanks Charles. Appreciate you! ~Laura

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/21/2022 3:06:00 PM

Laura, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania! ~Laura

Daisy Meadows

Date: 12/21/2022 12:45:00 PM

Lovely poem. Well done.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:05:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jeanette! ~Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2022 12:08:00 PM

Wow love this. Congrats on poem of the day.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:05:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea. ~Laura

Constance La France

Date: 12/21/2022 11:59:00 AM

Laura, I like your poem, I often listen to classical music with piano to calm me. Congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:06:00 AM

Classical piano music is the best for relaxation! So happy for your kind words. ~Laura

Jim Slaughter

Date: 12/21/2022 11:26:00 AM

I took piano lessons for about six months when I was a kid. I finally managed to play "Beautiful Dreamer" with both hands...very slowly...before finally admitting that the piano and I were not meant to be an item. I do admire anyone who can play, however, and I admire anyone who can write about it well enough to get a POTD on PS. Bravo!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/22/2022 8:08:00 AM

Thanks, Jim. My grandmother and father gave me and my siblings piano lessons at a young age. I didn’t take to it very well myself, but I started to play on my own by ear and learned I was better that way. Appreciate your kind words. ~Laura