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Passionate Haiku Contest

Picture one laying side by side Lips lost in pure ecstasy unaware of rain Picture six passion raining down lips gorge on delicious neck more than water rising PD kissing in the rain contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2013 9:27:00 PM

weeeee :-) PD

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/26/2013 10:32:00 AM

Well pictured. Good luck! AO

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2013 12:15:00 PM

Thanks

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/26/2013 6:58:00 AM

Exalted passion and sumptuous lines!! Am drawn towards 'more than water rising'.. Great job done, Richard!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2013 7:54:00 AM

I am glad you liked my little poems.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2013 12:38:00 AM

what I love about these are the last line of each one. They rocked!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2013 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/25/2013 10:59:00 PM

Great minds think alike...yes..the same two pictures captivated me; however, I wrote about image six only. We can do that, right???? Of course...with that "more than water rising" I don't stand a chance.... ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2013 7:55:00 AM

Yes in fact I don't know if I have done it wrong by choosing two. Thanks for commenting Eileen.