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Predictable, practical pose

as a simple sentence suggests,

accepting how the story goes,

while syllables shape silhouettes.

 

~ Simple scribbles serenade me ~

 

Paragraphs, hold poise and power

while illuminating passion,

and thoughts anticipate the hour,

forms flow in a feathered fashion.

 

~ Sonnets and sweet simplicity ~

 

Playful, parallel poetry

cause positions to part and pause,

dimensions divide, dive deeply,

and lines love to linger, because.

 

~ Synonyms sing a symphony ~

 

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** As thoughts twirl, they paint a picture **

           Please the senses with Poetry

      ( 8 syllable count within each line )

(PoetrySoup Format) Predictable, practical pose as a simple sentence suggests, accepting how the story goes, while syllables shape silhouettes. ~ Simple scribbles serenade me ~ Paragraphs, hold poise and power while illuminating passion, and thoughts anticipate the hour, forms flow in a feathered fashion. ~ Sonnets and sweet simplicity ~ Playful, parallel poetry cause positions to part and pause, dimensions divide, dive deeply, and lines love to linger, because. ~ Synonyms sing a symphony ~ --------------------------------------- * As thoughts twirl, they paint a picture * Please the senses with Poetry ( 8 syllable count within each line )

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Date: 4/9/2024 3:18:00 PM
I see this did very well for you. I was sure I commented already but I guess not. In any case you never fail to impress with the luv stuff
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/10/2024 5:01:00 AM
My poems Poe's untimely demise and Debacle are 8 syllable lines and yes, not an easy task. Have a great week
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/9/2024 6:28:00 PM
Yes, it did. 8 syllable count throughout is different for me. Challenging, but enjoyable indeed. Lucky me, if you've placed another comment within. :) Awe, thanks Tommy.
Date: 2/13/2024 5:20:00 AM
Dear Brandy, Your poem was a delightful dance on words! You play with form and language with such wit, turning the poem itself into a playful exploration of its own construction. Each Line capture the sheer joy of language and creative expression. And the playful repetition of "~" adds a charming musicality to the poem. I love how you dissect traditional poetry's form and hint at hidden depths within this deceptively simple structure. Your poem is refreshing in that even the most familiar forms can be reinvented with creativity and a dash of playfulness. I very much enjoyed your poem. - Blessings, Daniel
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/15/2024 9:04:00 AM
Dear Daniel, aligning words ( using alliteration ) and then posing each paragraph, certainly is a playful way to be expressive. I've combined both in this scribble of mine, while counting syllables. I'm in complete awe with your comment, along with all your compliments. Poetry is art in motion, and I enjoyed creating each magical moment within. Thank you my dear friend, for sharing in detail, how this poem made you feel. My heart is smiling. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/11/2024 2:55:00 AM
Amazing alliteration,word choice is brilliant...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/11/2024 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Harsha, for your lovely comment. I appreciate the compliment as well. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 11/26/2023 6:12:00 PM
Simply sensational Brandy, superb stellar scribbles indeed. I admire your poetic skill… Belle
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/27/2023 7:34:00 PM
Dear Belle, thank you for all your kind words and compliments. I wouldn't say I'm a skilled poetess, just one that enjoys scribbling outside the lines. :) Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Thank you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 10/20/2023 12:54:00 AM
Wonderful alliteration and word choice. Great poem and photo. Good luck in the contest.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/21/2023 6:59:00 PM
Thank you, Karen. I enjoyed creating this using an eight syllable count in every line. It's not for a contest, it was written just because. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 10/3/2023 12:22:00 PM
I really enjoyed the flow of your apprecuation Brandy., a relaxing rendering of possibility's Well poised.'
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/5/2023 7:07:00 PM
Thank you for saying the possibilities are well poised. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. I appreciate your lovely comment, Joe. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 9/9/2023 4:48:00 AM
My dear friend you with this playful fine ne creation show how truly great poetry is presented. A very fine pleasure to read his gem this fine morn. A definitive fav and thanks. God bless you.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2023 6:09:00 PM
Dear Robert, your lovely comment leaves me in complete awe. So kind of you to say that I'm able to create great poetry. Thank you for placing this is your favorites as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 6/28/2023 9:32:00 PM
Now I have discovered you, this is lyrically gorgeous like angelic serenade for my ears. Very lovely, Brandy:)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/29/2023 8:12:00 PM
Dear Christopher, thank you for reading this little scribble of mine, and for discovering my poetry. This is one of my favorites. You and your kind words are greatly appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 4/29/2023 10:37:00 PM
This is fantastic, well placed alliteration and nice and light to read, like you're flowing through the words. Well done :)
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Date: 4/30/2023 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Hat. I'm in complete awe with your lovely comment, along with your wonderful compliment. I'm just a simple woman that enjoys the simplicity of words. I appreciate you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 3/8/2023 10:21:00 AM
Just beautiful...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/8/2023 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Paige. I appreciate you and your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Date: 1/29/2023 8:41:00 PM
A FABULOUS parallel poetry. Girl, your style is breathtaking!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/30/2023 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Fin. I'm smiling and blushing with you saying my style is breathtaking. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/26/2023 4:52:00 AM
Oh!!! How beautiful!!!! Loved the use of words and emotions, so beautifully penned... " Synonyms sing a symphony... What a lovely imagery!!! Loved it Brandy.. A fav...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/27/2023 7:20:00 PM
I'm breathless with you saying this. Thank you, Supraja. Words are both powerful and passionate. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/24/2023 12:47:00 AM
Love the power of these gems, Brandy, the letters 'P and S' play there part, in this a serious sensitive poem.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/24/2023 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Harry. My muse thought these particular letters were satisfying and poetic. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/21/2023 10:07:00 AM
i really like this and the type of poetry it entails. Love these two lines especially:orms flow in a feathered fashion. ~ Sonnets and sweet simplicity ~
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/21/2023 2:47:00 PM
I enjoyed creating this simple, yet sophisticated scribble. Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate your thoughts and for sharing what lines you liked the best. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/20/2023 2:41:00 PM
Some wonderful alliteration in this piece; well done.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/20/2023 5:32:00 PM
So kind of you to say. Thank you, M. L . You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/19/2023 7:13:00 AM
Rereading this beauty yet again, and am left mesmerized, Brandy:) adding to my faves:)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/19/2023 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Jo, for coming back to read this again. So kind of you to place this in your favorites as well. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/16/2023 6:18:00 PM
Dearest Brandy, my lovely friend and inspiring poetess, it's been a while since I've melted into your teasing, tempting, playful, sensual and eloquent imagination. The way you play with words is breathtaking! I adore the graceful, ethereal ripples created through the Universe by your exquisite artistry. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, sweet lady.. ~Susan
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/17/2023 6:24:00 PM
Susan, my dear sweet friend. You always know the right words to say, and this comment is beyond breathtaking. My heart is smiling, simply because you've taken a moment of your time, to read this little scribble of mine. I'm in complete awe with your thoughts. Thank you so much. My best to you, in the New Year. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/15/2023 10:24:00 AM
I believe that the best poems do "have lines that linger, because", and this is one of those rare poems... Beautifully written, Brandy...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/15/2023 7:29:00 PM
I wouldn't refer to my poetry as rare. My heart is smiling. Such a wonderful thing to say, Kelly. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/15/2023 5:52:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful write! True poetry! A FAVE!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/15/2023 7:23:00 PM
Thank you Joe, for your lovely comment, and for placing this in your favorites. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/15/2023 1:37:00 AM
Ok, i see what you mean by being playful in your writing. I really like your rhythm, the way your words flow together. " Forms flow in a feathered fashion" great line. I think you may be my new BFF on here. You have encouraged me to jump back on and put my thoughts to pen. Thank you, your #1 fan.. much love!!!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/15/2023 7:19:00 PM
Playful and Poetic in many ways. Thank you, Jared. I like this line as well. So kind of you to read this scribble of mine. You make me smile saying this. Hello, my new friend. : ) I'm so happy that I was able to encourage you and your muse. You're very welcome. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/14/2023 7:32:00 AM
your words is singing for me, like a bird in a blossom tree!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/14/2023 7:52:00 PM
That's so sweet and poetic. Thank you Gitlan, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 1/13/2023 11:53:00 AM
this is one of those where one hears the calliope erupt in the harmony of diphthongs .....a truly beautiful writing and as clever as the quill of the poetess who holds such....loved its beauty in simplicity
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/13/2023 7:26:00 PM
Erupting in harmony. I like that. :) Your thoughts are elegant and graceful. Thank you, Timothy. I appreciate you and your lovely comment, along with the compliment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 1/8/2023 8:33:00 PM
Exquisite lyricism Brandy!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/10/2023 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, James. Your thoughts bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 12/31/2022 1:06:00 PM
Happy New Year, Brandy A fav. To say you have a way with words is an understatement.A most most unique poetess. Panagiota
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/31/2022 9:06:00 PM
I'm humbled by your compliment. Thank you Panagiota, for your lovely comment and for placing this in your favorites. Such a sweet thing to say. I'm just a simple poetess. Happy New Year ! :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 12/19/2022 3:47:00 PM
A sensual song of word you have penned dear Brandy. A lovely lingual lullaby.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/20/2022 6:57:00 PM
FJ, I've never thought about this poem being a "sensual song." A "lullaby". Reading this again and I see, it certainly could be. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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