Outlaw

Odious transgressor, Often wearing face masks. Objective - get money. Ominous demeanor, Offensive behavior, Out maneuvers the law. Ostracized by good folk.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/2/2023 7:29:00 AM

Nicely done Kim! :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/5/2023 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Linda!

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/29/2023 6:47:00 AM

Kim, I had not known this form! Terrific poem, makes me want to try one! Well done! Happy Saturday !!

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Mike!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/29/2023 6:17:00 AM

An exquisitely detailed masterpiece delving into the intricate lives of those individuals who cunningly exploit others for their sustenance, while avoiding any form of productive labor.

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:38:00 PM

Thank you, Sotto!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/29/2023 2:24:00 AM

A short, yet, detailed discussion on the Outlaw in the form of Pleiades. I should remind you at this juncture that I first learned this beautiful form through you. Thank you and congratulations!

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:38:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj! I remember starting those alphabet Pleiades contests. They were fun!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 7/29/2023 12:10:00 AM

Thank you Kim. Congratulations too on your win wirh this nice poem. Very true. Hugs!

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:37:00 PM

Thank you, Maria!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 7/28/2023 5:45:00 AM

Well done. Wouldn't it be nice if we could tell who the outlaws are because they always wear black? Like the old TV shows.

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:36:00 PM

It sure would. Thank you, Jerry!

Suzette Richards

Date: 7/28/2023 2:04:00 AM

You nailed the perception of the outlaw, Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:36:00 PM

Thank you, Suzette!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/27/2023 7:55:00 PM

As they jest: At least the outlaw is 'wanted!' ~ In-law... Nicely penned, Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:35:00 PM

Ha!ha! Thank you, Gershon!

Vineeth Shetty

Date: 7/27/2023 6:37:00 PM

That's a good description about my ol' FRIEND. Well penned.

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:35:00 PM

Thank you, Vineeth!

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/27/2023 5:15:00 PM

some people are "evil", we have to care, thanks for the interesting poem

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Yann!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2023 1:24:00 PM

Very descriptive work about that person/s who try to live off of others without working. Thanks for sharing this very interesting work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/27/2023 1:54:00 AM

Well described, Kim:)

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/1/2023 7:34:00 PM

Thank you, Jo!