Out In the Night, Tonight

When was the last time you've seen the night sky
In its naked beauty, no accessories, no star and no moonlight
Only scattered light in the neighbourhood to give a nice sight
And the blow of the cool breeze so good and bright
I believe in life and its beautiful ways
That's only what can make my heart a happy place
Tonight is special...sit and watch the plays
Or better off, let's make a puppy from the clay
I remember the face of the bright moon
And the edges of the sparkling stars 
As I watch from my little mud room
Behold tonight, is a night so scarce
The lids of my eyes will close soon
And I expect the uncensored night will wash my scars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/6/2016 6:06:00 PM
Hi Shehu, thanks for dropping by and the comment. Your words sing so gently into the night my friend. I do Love the visions you place into my mind in this write. I find peace within these words. Definitely a seven from me my Friend....Vlad.
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Date: 3/7/2016 2:03:00 PM
thanks Mike, I really do appreciate your comment...and the fact that you always find my poems from their hideout
Date: 1/2/2016 5:21:00 PM
I especially like the second line..This work is emotive and expressive and I think it is deeper than the reader can get from just a quick glance..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment..Welcome to soup..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2016 4:15:00 PM
thanks Sara...its a pleasure having you here
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