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Written: December 10, 2023 ________________________________________ A lengthwise lexicon for fulfilling any fantasy. Trapped in a landslide and given up by reality, In this vagrancy, the rocket derives no delight. Aigrette that unlocks the cosmos for sight. Admire splendor; the cosmos surely does. Each display case contains a galaxy in space. And using the observatory gives me a buzz. To ponder one light-year with a warm embrace. Consider the nebula and its wonderful dust. Melody of oceans and luster of cluster stars. A struggle amid density and gravity is a must. Consider the moon many craters and scars. Meteor motion astonished the asteroid belt. I do associate this motion with defect finding. An elegance is retained by a butterfly effect. Best weighed by sight, not by tech minding. But the cosmos is still a God-forsaken place. Since our path is elliptical, it will occur in pace. Aligned with our current era, perceived as clear. Saturn rings are still visible to us and appear. Thinking around inertia drags me toward earth. With our hands, we can retain our stance worth. The character is inversely correlated to the tide. Select a depth beyond which no volition can hide.

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Date: 12/11/2023 3:10:00 AM
I absolutely love this dr sotto, from your cosmically pleasing words to the way your lines flow in such a descriptive manner with profound rhymes etc truly blew me away and left me in awe inspired and pondering the depth of this write. Theres so much you’ve conveyed here which i can actually grasp but as you have a philosophical mind it is way much deeper than my naive mind can even imagine but you’ve said it all! Its always good to read and think and you do that very well. Pleasure always readn
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Date: 12/10/2023 6:42:00 PM
Space is a wonder that we are only recently realizing. You covered vast, innumerable light years of astrophysics in your poem. Thank you for a stellar trip.
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Date: 12/10/2023 5:43:00 PM
This poem is another brilliant, stellar creation, dear Sotto. You have such great talent with rhyme schemes. I loved the upbeat tone and especially liked the 2d verse. What power is that last verse! "With our hands we can retain our stance worth." I agree. Thanks for sharing your poetic skills and creativity. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 12/10/2023 2:33:00 PM
Sotto, once again I have to study your words, because I think I can understand them, even if I am not sure. I think we are in the same train, and you know?... The most beautiful thing, I'm listen to you now exactly as when was 7, listen to a Bob Seger song. Your words are so straight to everyone's heart that you only need a head to work them out. "With our hands, we can retain our stance worth." Totally agree Sotto. This is so beautiful. Enjoyed to read you all the time
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Date: 12/10/2023 11:47:00 AM
An inter galactic poem that portray the universe in poetic light... as always your rhyme and flow so beautifully.. nice alliterations and adjectives in your poem... that last stanza is brilliant..
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