Orange Horizon

Orange horizon Ripens, as waves graciously Caress, shores of life

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/16/2010 1:49:00 AM

This definitely capture the photo--such a vivid haiku! I wish you the best in the contest :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/14/2010 8:58:00 AM

This have to be in my treasure box.. this goes to my favz..Its a n exceptional scene James,Hundred points:)Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2010 8:21:00 AM

A wonderful description of the photo posted for the contest, James! Best wishes to you in the contest and for Valentine's Day! Love you, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/14/2010 8:09:00 AM

I love that you used the word ripens in this wonderful Haiku. Good luck in Raul's contest.

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/14/2010 12:36:00 AM

So much beauty in the sea and sky when they meet. nice one James...Margaret

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/13/2010 7:52:00 PM

Awesome! James! WOW! Goes to my fav. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2010 6:35:00 PM

Great minds go in the same direction. Many thoughts have I pondered with color. Great idea and write. Good luck in the contest. Should be in the winner's cirlce. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara