open door

feet are chill cold’s invited in for a spell

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/20/2024 11:13:00 AM

Get some thick socks ;);) Nice! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/13/2024 4:17:00 PM

I don't care for cold feet (literally and metaphorically) Sometimes chill enters the home and heart literally and figuratively. Either way is uncomfortable. Wishing you a pleasant evening dear Kim, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 8:03:00 PM

This one evoked a lot of emotion for you, Sara…lol. Don’t worry I have socks on right now :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/13/2024 3:04:00 PM

This is an interesting senryu. Perhaps a fireplace warmed a little too much. This poem has me thinking "Shut the door", since I don't like cold feet.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 8:04:00 PM

Usually me too.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/13/2024 10:51:00 AM

Few words with much said.... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 2:58:00 PM

Thank you, sweet friend!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/13/2024 10:34:00 AM

A tender poem- in its own way, as beautiful :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2024 2:59:00 PM

Lovely day today. A bit cool but it will be way too hot soon. :)