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The sun was rising high in the east over the town of Milton creek It was the eighteenth day of December, the start of Christmas week All the store fronts were decorated; it was a colourful sight to see And even outside Sheriff Koplin's jailhouse was a six-foot pine tree. The town church was now completed, and it now had a preacher He hailed from way back east and he was once a schoolteacher His folks were of Dutch descent and his name was Paul Nederlof All the ladies in town loved him because his hat he'd always doff. Tom had been away to see some doctors in the state of New York He'd struggled of late digging deep graves with his shovel and fork The doctors had all advised him that he should do no more digging But he needed income and some way of making an honest living. He decided to keep his funeral parlour and what he would now do Would be to employ some townsfolk and pay them a dollar or two Preacher Paul would also be hired to do any readings when required As far as digging graves was concerned; Mayor Tom was now retired. Tom spread the word that there would be a council meeting at noon And would take place in his mayor's office above Jan's Manx saloon Lin opened the meeting saying, "As you know Milt used to do Santa And he'd always give all the kids a bag of candy, an apple or banana." After a brief silence Sheriff Koplin said, "Well, it won't be the same But if you can't get a volunteer to do Santa, then yes Lin I'm game." Lin added “That would be such a lovely thing to do in Milt's memory And for honouring him there will be a steak meal at Aces on me." Lin added "I had a letter from Ranger David, wishing y'all good cheer But he won't be heading back to town until sometime in the new year" It was now Tania's turn to speak up, and excitedly she had this to say "Deb and I will make some cakes and we'll both sing carols on the day. Then Deputy Terry said," I'll be able to make a grotto out of wood And if the mayor has any old spare pine coffins; well, that'd be good" Tom said, "Come and see me at sun-up and I'll see what I can do And I'm sure a few of our good townsfolk will be happy to help you." Then from out of her bag Jan produced a large bottle of clear spirit Sheriff Koplin stared at it curiously and he wondered what was in it Jan then poured out seven glasses and offered everyone a drink Saying, "It's called Manx spirit, do try it and tell me what you think?." Everyone in the room had a taste, and they were pleasantly surprised Tom said, "Jan, this is real good stuff and will sell well" he surmised With the town's business discussed the meeting ended mid afternoon Tom added, "Best rattle your hocks 'cos Christmas will be here soon." The days flew by, and it was now the twenty second day of December Tom was determined it would be a day for the townsfolk to remember Everyone in town played their part ensuring that everyone had fun Sheriff Koplin looked a bit uncomfortable in his Santa suit in the sun. Nighttime quickly approached and Preacher Paul stood up to speak "I'd like to say a few words about an honourable man of Milton Creek Although I didn't know him, I've been told he was sincere and true He was very supportive of everyone, especially those that he knew". "From what you folks have told me, Milt had a great interest in poetry And he also liked to write poetry himself and so very talented was he Tania has chosen a few of his poems that she'd like to read out to you Yes, Milt was a very talented poet; a fact you folks already knew." Tania finished reciting three of Milt's poems and then had this to say "Let's not forget our good friend Milt who left town a year ago today" Then all the children stood behind Deb and Tania and started to sing It was quite emotional to see, the town had never seen such a thing. Chirping crickets couldn't be heard as the sound of carols filled the air The whole town had turned out it seemed because everyone was there It had been quite an emotional day with lots of laughter and a few tears A day the townsfolk would never forget, and they'd remember for years. The celebrations ended Preacher Paul said, "Hope to see y'all soon" Some of the menfolk weren't ready for bed and headed off for the saloon It had clouded over and from the sky above a few fine flakes of snow blew Lin whispered to Tom," I think it's a sign from someone we once knew. " The day had been a great success and for all the children it had been fun Mayor Tom was so proud of everyone and for everything that they'd done It had been a day of remembrance and celebration but had ended too soon Bedtime can wait a while thought Tom and made his way over to the saloon. Mayor Tom pushed open the batwing doors and the party was in full swing Tania and Deb were both up on the stage because they both loved to sing It had just gone past the midnight hour when two loud gun shots rang out Folks rushed out of the saloon onto Main Street but there was no one about. In the distance they heard galloping hooves as someone rode out of town Sheriff Koplin rushed over to the saloon and said "I found a body face down " There were loud gasps from the crowd, and someone asked him "Well, who?" The sheriff answered, "I'm not prepared to say, but it's not someone you knew." Sheriff Koplin, Mayor Tom, and Deputy Terry went to the end of Main Street Mayor Tom said "We need to keep this quiet, so I'll go and get a winding-sheet" They quickly covered the lifeless body and placed it on a wagon to take away "Justice will be served" Said Sheriff Koplin," Sun-up we ride east for Santa Fe."
Milton.L.Hankins Left town on the 22nd of December 2022. Never to return. I'm sure he's looking down and 'chuckling' Rest In Peace Milton.
Written on the 22nd December 2023,

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Date: 9/11/2024 12:48:00 PM
Loved this narrative, this is the town I would want to live in, great writing.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/11/2024 1:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Alesia, I'm happy you enjoyed it. I love the old American West, I must have read all of Louis Lamour's novels and that's inspired many western themed poems I've written. Check out vultures circling, it's in two parts. Tom
Date: 1/31/2024 6:57:00 AM
Wow Tom....I am sorry I missed this in Dec. You have penned a gorgeous tribute to a man we looked up to and I love how you incorporated Deb and Tania into the cinematic picture you painted with words. Love this! Milton would have too! Paulette
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Date: 1/31/2024 4:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Paulette, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Milton enjoyed being part of the story, such a fine poet and gentleman he was. Tom
Date: 1/18/2024 6:19:00 PM
Warmest congratulations on being in the '100 Best New Poems' list, and on POTD. Your tribute to Milton is a marvelous one, Tom. It brought many smiles. Kindest regards.
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Date: 1/18/2024 11:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Judy, I know it's a bit on the long side but I just kept on going, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Been over a year now and he's still missed on here. Hope you're keeping well.. Tom
Date: 1/14/2024 3:47:00 AM
Good Morning Tom. Always is it an honor turning to your page and extraordinary work. I read this slowly so I could soak in the happenings but you were clear and we readers were all in the scene looking on. Once again congratulations on this continued serious and Milton would be proud. I for one loved and enjoyed the mention of Jan and her bag of cheer - that was excellent on all levels. Thank you for sharing once again. Have a wonderful morning. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 1/14/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Lisa, I'm happy that you enjoyed my tribute to our good friend Milton. I'm sure he would have enjoyed this one. I know he enjoyed being part of the story. Jan of course has taken over the saloon and it's now called the Manx as that name is associated with the Isle of Man where Jan is from. Tom
Date: 1/6/2024 12:24:00 AM
This is another wonderful instalment on the continuing saga of Milton Creek, Tom. I had been so busy in December that I missed this. I am sure Milton chuckles as he is so honored by his remembrances of his dear friends. It is hard to believe it has already been a year since his sad passing, but he is home with his sweetheart now. He moved up to the big house that rests highest on the highest hill, watching over the creek and his friends from above. Happy New Year Tom, I hope it is much blessed.
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Date: 1/14/2024 10:40:00 AM
Thank you very much BJ, time passes so quickly and I wanted to write a tribute to Milton, he enjoyed being part of the Milton Creek saga and that's what I went for, I'm sure he would have enjoyed it. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
Date: 12/29/2023 8:38:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on being in the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup with your creative/lovely write. Love This One. It was fun to read it again... Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Date: 12/29/2023 8:57:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Paula, I'm happy you enjoyed it second time around. Hope you have a happy and healthy New year. Tom
Date: 12/27/2023 7:12:00 PM
Another wonderful story of Milton Creek Tom: Milt was probably watching over your shoulder as you wrote it. I hope you are feeling better and want to wish you a Happy 2024, Cheers, SuZ
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/28/2023 3:32:00 AM
Hi Tom: I am glad the surgery has helped. Sometimes it is the only way to fix things. SuZ
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/27/2023 8:44:00 PM
Thank you very much Suz, Im sure he was, he loved a bit of humour and I couldn't think of a better way to honour our friend. Hope your Christmas celebrations went well and wishing you all the best for a happy 2024. Im getting stronger by the day now, I'm so glad to have had the operation. Tom
Date: 12/27/2023 6:50:00 PM
Tom, this a truly magnificent narrative poem. It is skillfully written with a smoothly flowing plot and a great theme. Admirable way to honor Milton! Janice
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Date: 12/27/2023 8:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Janice, he was a great loss to poetry soup and his fellow poets. A gentleman and a fine poet too. Tom
Date: 12/27/2023 6:36:00 PM
Very kind of you to tribute your friend! Happy POTD!
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Date: 12/27/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Paige, he was very supportive of his fellow poets and was well liked on here, he was part of the original story of what was Soup Creek now renamed in his honour. Happy New year to you.. Tom
Date: 12/26/2023 4:24:00 AM
What a lovely tribute to our friend Milton. You have paid ample tribute to him in your inimitable style. It doesn't sound a made up story, but a true account of a live commemoration. Hats off Tom for the well deserved honor of POTD
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Date: 12/26/2023 9:30:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Valsa, Milton loved being a part of the ongoing saga of Milton Creek, Tom
Date: 12/25/2023 10:11:00 AM
Wow a POTD. It is so nice to see him honored. A great loss for us when he died
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Date: 12/25/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, it was a great loss to soup when he passed away. Doesn't feel like a year ago, how time flies. Hope your Christmas is going well. Tom
Date: 12/24/2023 3:07:00 PM
Another great episode in the Milton Creek saga, Tom. Congrats on POTD with this Milton tribute. Have a great Christmas.
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Date: 12/24/2023 9:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Terry, I was going to write a serious one but I know Milt had a great sense of humour and went with this one, I'm sure he would have enjoyed it. As for the ending, better put my thinking cap on lol. Merry Christmas to you and your family and have a happy and healthy 2024. Tom
Date: 12/24/2023 2:21:00 PM
This is special to write in his memory. Congrats for POTD. As always, you are a great story teller. Keep up the writing this new year to come. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Date: 12/24/2023 9:10:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, 2023 wasn't the best year for me health wise but now I've had my op I'm raring to go. Merry Christmas. Tom
Date: 12/24/2023 11:54:00 AM
Didn't know Milton, but you did him proud Great POTD. Isn't it great when you start writing a stanza, and it keeps on flowing. Hope Milton is still chuckling.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/24/2023 12:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul, didn't intend to write such a long poem but the ideas kept coming, any more and it would have been a book. I'm sure that Milton would have enjoyed this tribute verse to him. Tom
Date: 12/24/2023 11:00:00 AM
What a wonderful story and a lovely tribute to Milton. I know he would love it. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB PS Congrats on a well deserved POTD
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Date: 12/24/2023 12:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Judy, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Milt enjoyed being part of the saga. Hope you too have a lovely Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
Date: 12/24/2023 7:04:00 AM
Critics Corner: "As Hilton is to Hotels, so is Milton to Creeks." ~ Mr. Sleek. ... congrats on POTD, Tom. And Merry Christmas to you and yours. :) gw
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Date: 12/24/2023 11:11:00 AM
Lol, thank you very much Gershon, wishing you too and yours, all the Joy's of the season. Tom
Date: 12/24/2023 4:36:00 AM
lol my you tell a good story on Christmas Eve, lol, congrats on your potd Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/24/2023 4:39:00 AM
Thank you very much Vie, I'd only intended a few stanzas and just kept on going lol. It was my way of honouring our good friend Milton. Have a lovely Christmas. Tom
Date: 12/24/2023 1:15:00 AM
Tom , another wonderful write and very special tribute for Milton…l didn't know Milton long but l know so many here on P.S admired and adored him….he was lucky to have friends like you that will never forget him! Well deserved POTD my friend….Congratulations!! Debx
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Date: 12/24/2023 2:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Deb, glad you enjoyed it. He was a rock on here, he supported so many of his fellow poets. Wishing you and your family a very happy Christmas. Safe travels. Tom
Date: 12/23/2023 10:09:00 PM
Well i was going to put why can't the rest of The world be like this? Then I ran into a dead End so to put it.' All the best for Christmas Tom.'
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Date: 12/23/2023 10:28:00 PM
Thank you Joe, I know our world today is twisted and corrupt with greed and land grabbing driving it. Throw in evil and hatred too. Despite that, there are good people about. Merry Christmas and hope you have happy 2024.. Tom
Date: 12/23/2023 9:16:00 PM
Tom, very happy to see your Milton Creek poem receive the POEM OF THE DAY honor
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Date: 12/23/2023 9:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congratulations and return visit Constance, much appreciated. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and good health and happiness in 2024. Tom
Date: 12/23/2023 2:12:00 PM
Dear Tom, we are so much more than scribblers, painters creating a masterpiece in this community. Connections are made, indeed. Friendships are formed, and they last forever. Milton will always be a part of us. This is a beautiful tribute to him. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/23/2023 6:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Brandy, he loved these humourous writes so I couldn't think of a better way to honour him, he enjoyed being a part of it. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
Date: 12/23/2023 2:08:00 PM
Tom, I am so impressed reading these tributes to Milton Hankins. You have a really noble heart. Just thinking about it gives me a great feeling about you and poetry in general. The uses of writing in your hands are wonderful! Thanks!!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/23/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Duke, he was a great presence on soup, always encouraging others and is still missed on here. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas. Tom
Date: 12/23/2023 12:17:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Tom on another very worthy win with a tale in Milton Creek. So wonderfully written. I never had the pleasure of knowing Milton but reading all the remembrance comments makes me wish I had! A wonderful tribute to him and it was so entertaining as usual and we are left with a cliffhanger … Keep thrilling us with your magnificent storytelling skills. Hope you have had a good celebratory day. Blessings to you.
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Date: 12/23/2023 12:39:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Christina. I'm pleased that you enjoyed my tribute poem to Milton. He was very supportive to his fellow poets and was well liked on here. He was one of the original characters on what was Soup Creek but we decided to rename it in his honour to Milton Creek. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a happy and healthy 2024. Tom
Date: 12/23/2023 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Dear Tom. You are a kind-hearted soul - we are lucky to have you here. I miss Milton too..I had the opportunity to read his poems many times! Merry Christmas!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/23/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Mala, he left a void when he passed away unexpectedly last year but we won't forget him. I hope you too have a lovely Christmas and good health and happiness in 2024. Tom
Date: 12/23/2023 7:37:00 AM
A FAV for my collection of the series, Tom. Thanks for sharing your awesome talent with us, my friend. Congratulations on your POTD honor for this beautiful poem and for honoring a poet friend to many, Milt. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
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Date: 12/23/2023 8:54:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and for faving it Bill, much appreciated. Its the longest one I've ever written and I know Milt would have approved. Have a lovely Christmas. Tom
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