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On Everest

I stand on top of world. I’ve won! I’m a statue frozen solid - On tippy-toes I’ve reached the sun. I took a showering from cloud. I’m bitten up with frosty snow. Too late for me to brag out loud. This sunny sphere won’t help unfreeze. On Everest, I’m cold of brain, Too full of pride, to bend my knees. Could artist rush to see me there, and would he chisel me like wax, to find my form - for I am bare. And would a poet shed some tears and make believe that I was brave or struggle with our greatest fears? Who’d music bring to sing of me? Are sirens here at top of world and have they climbed so far from sea? On tippy-toes I’ve reached the sun. There, fire and ice at loggerheads. Deceived of life - it’s death, I won. 8/31/2022

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Date: 9/1/2022 8:43:00 AM
Pity a masterpiece of ice. It will melt unless it's high on some glacier.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2022 12:31:00 PM
On Everest I don’t think anything melts (shrug)
Date: 8/31/2022 8:21:00 PM
Liked Gershon's comment Kim, did you pay him to say that? lol...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2022 8:59:00 PM
I paid him in ice cold cash ;)
Date: 8/31/2022 7:18:00 PM
I just can't resist this moronic comment, so here goes: Hey, Kim, I'm on Everest too. I'm ever resting. ~ Sleepy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2022 7:51:00 PM
LOL!

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