Ominous Clouds Bank

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There is a variety of peach that grows here that turns a mixture of yellow and red..When falls angular light reflects upon them it is as if the field is ablaze with color..Sara

. Ominous clouds bank... Peach orchard ablaze with fire Fall's angular light

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Danny Stinson

Date: 11/20/2011 11:40:00 PM

I love all your poems about fall; it's my favorite season!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/14/2011 9:11:00 PM

So special Sara, and the angular light deepens the meaning in your lovely ku.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/14/2011 12:05:00 PM

Very well put Sara! I just love clouds and their unique meaning within them! You have a well said Haiku! Awesome work!!

Jim Wilson

Date: 11/14/2011 7:07:00 AM

I like the way this sets up an image, and then the last line turns it into something more benign; the movement from 'fire' to 'angular light' is well done and adherence to the standard form is gratifying. Thanks, Jim

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 11/14/2011 6:17:00 AM

Vivid!

Tony Lane

Date: 11/14/2011 5:58:00 AM

Beautiful fall image Sara. Tony