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Older Dad, Older Daughter

Jet-black hair faded to gray; tall, slender figure arched with age— sagging like the skin around your eyes so much like mine. Your loud voice has quieted and become gentle as the years have passed. Your once harsh hands now seek to guide me on paths I had to discover without you. Father, I wonder— while you have been present but still so far away— just how much time have we lost?

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Date: 4/3/2025 11:24:00 AM
Awesome work on the winners' list. Congratulations on your wind. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 4/3/2025 6:17:00 AM
Hmmm. Cat in the cradle stuff here Vaviana. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/2/2025 7:58:00 PM
eternity! solid write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/27/2025 8:52:00 AM
Oof
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