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Old Man Mountain

Old man mountain, face, flowing white mane, unending ever evolving. Insprired by Raul Moreno's contest thanks for the challenge

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Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 10:23:00 AM

I like the description in this one Doris.....:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 2:46:00 AM

Good Haiku. Constant change that can't be stopped. Keep writing. Mom

Donna Golden

Date: 10/7/2009 10:19:00 PM

Great haiku, Doris! You've brought the mountain to life in a brand new way! Hugs, Donna

Marty Owens

Date: 10/7/2009 6:38:00 PM

Hey Doris, Would you believe I saw that same face. I was sitting about 5 ft from my PC and I said hey that looks like an old man with a beard.Weird Huh? lol I enjoyed your Haiku...Marty