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Old Heart

Most times, old heart, you're like a sultry walking blues; 48 beats per minute of Muddy or John Lee shuffling a twelve bar, never out of rhythm, classic, lazy, drowsy old man's beat boom,boom boom, boom boom, boom boom, boom Old heart, your beat's sometimes like a vicious bebop chorus; Coltrane or Parker blasting a furious solo as the notes fly up my chest like bubbles rising in water and popping through the surface Old heart, I don't mind your bebop and I love your blues But please don't learn any techno Or we're done Y'hear?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/22/2014 12:08:00 PM
Love the analogy David...cheers
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David Brown
Date: 7/22/2014 2:44:00 PM
Thanks Tim
Date: 7/22/2014 8:38:00 AM
yes make sure it keeps a steady beat David. great write! Hugs jan xx
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David Brown
Date: 7/22/2014 2:44:00 PM
Thanks Jan

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