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Oh Carol

It is easy to determine something is wrong. I get that feeling each time I hear your song. You admitted that you are but a fool. You love Carol, but she treats you cruel. There is a bit of faulty grammar I see. You should say she “treats you cruelly”. She hurts you, and she makes you cry. However, if she leaves you, you will surely die. Your song became a hit throughout the nation. Neil, you are not in that bad of a situation. It is about time you reassessed Carol’s worth. She is not the only living woman on the earth. The Marvelettes say, “There’s too many fish in the sea”. Let go of Carol and get yourself free. When I hear your lyrics, you sound a bit wussy. There are plenty of other girls if you want some CENSORED. Entertainer, songwriter, and recording artist Neil Sedaka has had a fabulous career spanning over several decades. His fine work continues today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/7/2011 1:10:00 AM
Another one,,,,,,,just great,,,,,,,,what else can I say....Keep writing, love your style. Hugssssss
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Date: 1/6/2011 1:55:00 PM
hmmm, i have heard of Neil Sedaka but don't recall a song about Carol. I enjoyed this. And say, thanks for taking the time to read three of my poems recently. Let me see one more of yours and then i need to get offline!
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:46:00 PM
Very unique Robert .. Sedaka was a grand entertainer and his songs so well known.. a nice tribute to one of his most well known ones..luv..enjoyed your entertaining write..
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:02:00 PM
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Date: 1/5/2011 6:38:00 PM
great Robert, now that darn song is stuck in my head, cute poem
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