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Ocean Eyes

Walking all night On the glittering wet sand of a sea shore.. In the shadows of twinkling stars.. Through a silver airial fabric of a tiny waning Moonlight Till the sun begin to rise fom within the lap of distant crimson waves.. And gently start ascending to the magical sky... With scattered purple clouds... For this spectacular sight Ocean halts and transforms to mirror To wholly reflect the colours of Dawn From its redish wine waves... Wow, his view is like a pupil on the blue Sun Ball far away on the horizon Sea acts like the lower lash While the sky like the upper one With the magic of tiny pieces of hued clouds Sublime!! Perhaps a glimpse of big bang... Or a corner of heaVen... Eternity in every moment..! (12-21 2020)

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Christina Bowring

Date: 1/25/2024 11:11:00 PM

Thought I would visit one of your older posted poems dear Paghunda and I’m glad I did. This is a beauty! It’s so alive with wondrous imagery full of colourful, creative imagination. Breathtaking scenes ‘ glittering wet sand’ ‘ crimson waves’ ‘ reddish wine waves’. So creative and captivating. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :):)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/26/2024 5:48:00 AM

I am delighted and humbled by your kind remarks Bowring. I am happy that you liked and enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much. Stay blessed

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/31/2023 11:25:00 AM

A lovely write. I did one on eyes. It was called "God's Eyes" Date Written: 1/20/2022. I love walking the beach. It has been a few years since I did it. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/26/2024 5:46:00 AM

Thanks Paula.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/8/2022 3:30:00 AM

This is a gorgeous poem with such vivid imagery as if I'm watching it happening in front of me.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 8/27/2022 4:42:00 PM

That's awesome... Thank you.. Means alot

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2022 7:26:00 AM

This is very lovely. Superb imagery! Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/15/2022 10:44:00 AM

Thank you wong

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/17/2021 2:21:00 PM

Stellar lines like "..scattered colored clouds" and "..red wine waves" give poetry its resonance. Beautiful work. Congratulations! Sincerely, Brian

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 7/22/2021 12:35:00 PM

Thanks :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/4/2021 10:14:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful... I flowed with the images and the emotions . Ocean halts and transforms to mirror . Love this ! Belated Congratulations on your win. All the best , Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 11:31:00 AM

Thank you Susan

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/24/2021 4:26:00 AM

Quality descriptiveness all the way through.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/4/2021 11:30:00 AM

Thanks

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/13/2021 3:00:00 AM

I love your chosen phrases and the way you wrote this poem my friend - yes, scenes as you describe helps us visualize that eternity is in every moment of this awesome poem you wrote, a gem my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/14/2021 3:39:00 AM

Thank you for being here sweet Jennifer, I missed you

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/13/2021 3:02:00 AM

Congratulations on you win my friend, love, Jenny.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2021 2:18:00 PM

An absolute beauty this is. So descriptive, and also a winner I see. Congrats.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/10/2021 11:38:00 PM

Thank you Andrea :)

Constance La France

Date: 2/5/2021 3:56:00 PM

Paghunda, congratulations on your win in Brian's Your Choice contest with this excellent write, well done _Constance

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/8/2021 9:03:00 AM

Thanks a lot Constance!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/29/2020 6:24:00 PM

A marvelous write, Paghyunda. Pure inspiration! Thanks, Gershon

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/7/2021 10:02:00 PM

Humbled

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/27/2020 1:24:00 PM

WOW!! This is magnificent... I love it from start to finish.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/7/2021 10:01:00 PM

Cheers!

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/24/2020 10:04:00 AM

A splendid depiction of Creation, Paghunda in poetic form! Thanks so much for your kind comment re My 2021 New Years Resolution. I too have made many resolutions in the past and they turned out to be meaningless! A very Happy Holiday Season to you and your family - Bob

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/7/2021 10:02:00 PM

Happy new year Robert!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/24/2020 8:34:00 AM

This to me is truly a wonderful poem. One that reveals the poet's heart and soul. I mark this as a true poetic gem and a most inspirational piece.. A fav... A beauty, A treasure... God bless..

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 1/7/2021 10:01:00 PM

Thank you Robert! Means a lot. Stay blessed

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/22/2020 8:26:00 PM

Paghunda, A corner of heaven saved in this poem's far reach. I can see your vision of shores morning and night and never grow tired. -Richard

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Raven. Had no intentions of writing a poem. Just giving caption to a photo, and the lyrics Ocean Eyes started playing somewhere in the back of my mind. And I ended up writing this one. Thought it's more like a poem. So posted here.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/22/2020 11:14:00 AM

your poem in itself is sublime dear poet. Thank you for sharing. Have a beautiful festive season.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2020 9:00:00 AM

Pleasure is all mine Mystic

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/21/2020 11:27:00 AM

Hello Paghunda Zahid, so nice to meet you. this poem is lovely. I like the way you painted the scene with your words. I love the water whether the sea , ocean river, lakes. The sound of the water rushing to shore I find relaxing. I look forward to your comment. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/23/2020 10:27:00 AM

Hello Paghunda, a beach is a place many people go to cool off from the heat. If and when you have the chance to go to a beach- go. You would enjoy it. enjoy your day my friend.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2020 9:04:00 AM

I have never been to a beech. But I am in love with sea shores and beeches. The images I have in my mind are incredibly beautiful. & yes thanks to all those who take pics when they visit such breathtaking places :)