Oblivion

Oh, what a strange yet seemingly typical phenomenon it is these days
But hearing of folks sinking into a state of forgetfulness -
Lying on their beds or in the public streets, drunk or stoned out of their minds.
It is most unfortunate that so many people today wish to
Vanish themselves from the world and bury themselves
In deliberate ignorance, unmindfulness, unawareness,
Or even complete unconsciousness to escape their miserable circumstances.
Nobody is meant to be perpetually oblivious unless they're in an actual coma!

March 25, 2023
for Writing Challenge - 'O' Words Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Constance La France
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Date: 3/27/2023 10:40:00 PM
Many helplessly sink into oblivion through dementia or Alzheimer's. But some deliberately invite oblivion as an escape from the harsh realities of life. Congratulations on your win dear Andrea
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Date: 3/29/2023 11:58:00 AM
so true about dementia or people that end up like vegetables
Date: 3/27/2023 10:49:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2023 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations on a great acrostic win, Andrea:)
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Date: 3/26/2023 6:53:00 PM
You’ve said it, sister! I love my wakefulness but many live in oblivion. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:34:00 PM
I could never understand weakness Andrea. I know it's around us, but I find facing life preferable to denying it. Great write! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/26/2023 12:59:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your wonderful acrostic poem, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/26/2023 9:41:00 AM
Despair and self loathing are terrible bedfellows. Powerful pen, Andrea. *per usual)
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Date: 3/26/2023 8:01:00 AM
Interesting subject. I have eaten the worm at the bottom of the bottle. And been in cocaine comas for long stretches of time. Hahaha Some of the best times of my life..Hell of a rollercoaster ride. Andrea I doubt very much you have lost control of your senses ever Thats a good thing for most people. Keep up the good work. Read my poem My Demon That tells it all Take care
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Date: 3/25/2023 9:20:00 PM
These days, anything goes. Lol. Great write for contest, Andrea.
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Date: 3/25/2023 8:26:00 PM
i don't know why, people do, this is deep and generous poem, thanks yann
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Date: 3/25/2023 1:17:00 PM
this is great, andrea! best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/25/2023 1:17:00 PM
- Something to think about, Andrea ... and we ask questions, why ... probably many different answers .. great poem :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:25:00 PM
You're so right, Andrea! We may wish to be zonked, but I believe we're here for a purpose, come what may. Best of luck!
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:12:00 AM
Great write For the contest.
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:01:00 AM
Wow! Andrea, This is an excellent acrostic. It's a good poem for a contest. It describes the state of our world very well. You excel in all forms. Best wishes in the contest. PS, How are you? I hope is well with you and your loved ones. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis
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