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Silence is an absence. Silence is profound. Silence is a conversation being had without sound. Silence is an expression One that cannot be heard. Silence cannot be spoken Although it is a word. Silence is a presence of great nothingness. Silence can be something And yet cease to exist. Silence can fill a room and have no mass at all. Silence cannot be dropped Yet it can fall. Silence is a mystery that will forever go unsolved. Silence is how every sound can swiftly be dissolved. Silence is the sound of rest, the only sound that can sound best. While other sounds can cause great pain, silence is not the sound to blame. Silence is what silence is— something that is nothing, nothing that still exists.

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Date: 5/10/2024 10:22:00 AM
Sans thought, ego dies, so in that vibrant silence, Who is the witness?
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/10/2024 4:25:00 PM
appreciate your visit and your thought provoking question. Will think about it for sure. enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 4:41:00 PM
I felt this poem transcends the last of physics. It does seem that silence contains great power. The brain has been challenged.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/10/2024 3:55:00 AM
I appreciate your marvelous comments, Hilda. 'Transcending the Law of physics...wow, no better compliment for this poem. Grateful for your visit and kind words. enjoy your day, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 3:36:00 PM
Marvellous, Sara. How rarely we experience true silence. Even lying awake in the midst of night, there’s leaves shuffling or things scuffling. But it’s when you have a germ in your head… that elusive rhyming line that is just beginning to form in your head… and some eejit speaks… and you know that line is lost. That’s when I crave silence. Enjoyed muchly. Terry
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:51:00 PM
I can relate to your frustration, Terry...being interrupted while rhyming is akin to being interrupted when one's about to sneeze...the sneeze is gone forever :-) I appreciate your visit and am grateful you enjoyed my poem. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 12:41:00 PM
A fav for me, gosh it's amazing, deep, beautiful-"silence is a conversation being had without sound." wow
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:52:00 PM
awww, thank you, Paige. I appreciate your enthusiasm for my poem and am humbly grateful for the fave--that means a great deal to me. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 10:09:00 AM
Dear Sara, This investigation into the nature of silence is really captivating. The intricacies are brought to light through your exquisite dissection. It may be heavy and liberating, deep and hollow. Beautifully emphasizing the calming power of silence your poem compels us to listen to the stillness!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:53:00 PM
thanks, dear Sotto, for stopping by; grateful you found my words captivating. Liked the word 'dissection.' You truly do have a wonderful command of the English language. have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 8:36:00 AM
Dear Sara, What a fascinating exploration of silence! You break it down beautifully, showing its complexities. The lines "Silence is a conversation / being had without sound" and "Silence is a presence / of great nothingness" perfectly capture the paradoxical nature of silence. It can be both profound and empty, a weight and a release. The ending about silence being the "sound of rest" is a lovely touch, highlighting its potential for peace. This poem truly makes you listen to the silence! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:55:00 PM
appreciate your visit, Daniel; am glad you found my exploration of silence fascinating. I crave silence--have always been that way. Don't know how I taught high school for over 20 years--not exactly a quiet place :-) I was younger then, perhaps that's why :-) Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 8:08:00 AM
Very nicely said, Sara! Silence says much. We need those pauses.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:56:00 PM
I agree with you Kim. We all need silent pauses from time to time. Have a great evening, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 6:24:00 AM
Nothing beats it Sara, love sitting in a room in total silence, it soothes the soul. Tom
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:56:00 PM
gosh, me too...I love that 'void.' You're right; it is soothing for the soul. have a great evening and thanks for dropping by, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 6:21:00 AM
I love this so much. You are such a great poet. Bravo!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:57:00 PM
wow, thank you, Richard, for your complimentary words. I appreciate your kindness. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 5:43:00 AM
Silence holds the presence of all sound in its domain
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:57:00 PM
oh, I like the way you think! Thanks for visiting & have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 5/9/2024 5:40:00 AM
To quote one of those oldie songs. Silence is Golden.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 3:58:00 PM
thanks for that reminder! Appreciate your visit and remarks. Have a great evening, Sara

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