Not Winning

I hate to clean the bathroom floor... my thinning hair is there - much more! For "Couplet Challenge" sponsored by Susan Burch.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/10/2011 10:30:00 AM

I comes as a shock doesn't it? Too bad there isn't fertilizer for the problem. You do such great things with so few words George!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2011 12:42:00 PM

LOL We both wrote about the bathroom floor, but I love your take with the "thinning hair," George. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 10:20:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest George. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 11:04:00 PM

WAY to GO, George. Congrats on your win.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 9/29/2011 5:02:00 PM

Funny one George! Congrats. to you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2011 10:10:00 PM

hahaha, this one is a riot, George!!! Happy birthday to ya soon!!!