Nine Mirrors

square of nine mirrors admiring his reflection - the kitten’s labyrinth

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/30/2023 10:18:00 AM

Very deep, Kim.... an unusual haiku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 4:44:00 PM

As always you are much appreciated, Paige! Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2023 8:59:00 PM

Better than the 'Hall of Mirrors' at the Amusement Park!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:13:00 AM

Awesome! Thank you, Gershon! I hope I find the skinny mirror ;)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/29/2023 3:59:00 PM

This is awesome, Kim! I enjoyed it a lot. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thank you truly, my friend!

Paul Bell

Date: 8/29/2023 8:28:00 AM

I would get to the ninth mirror and start again.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2023 8:44:00 AM

And again and again… Well aren’t you clever, Paul!

Mike Bayles

Date: 8/29/2023 6:40:00 AM

I like it, especially the last line, a nice twist to your haiku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2023 8:43:00 AM

Thank you, Mike! Glad you liked the twist!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/29/2023 3:57:00 AM

Nice imagery. Happy to read the kitten can still see nine lives. Thanks Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2023 8:43:00 AM

Yes! How foolish would humans be with nine lives…

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/29/2023 2:24:00 AM

Oh wow, such a wonderful wordplay with brilliant crafting! That's a perfect cube poem, love this so much! "Square of nine mirrors" Definitely created the required dimension! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2023 8:42:00 AM

Thank you so much! Love what you see!