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Nikko's Sibling's Troll

Wow, this is way too hard I don't think I can do it Okay, it's still worth a try Finding a word to fit I'll try to say all that I can And not say anything at all This brain is way too ignorant And words now starting to crawl Nikko's sibling is a villian For thinking of this pain It's way too hard and I can't do it It's a path with nothing to gain This brain is on vacation And far away is this goal I want to say to Nikko's sibling Thanks a lot for this troll Okay, I know that I can't win it For again I can't find a word I think that I will stop right now And possibly I'll win third For Nikko's Contest

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/7/2010 5:57:00 PM

Fourth place - not too shabby. Congrats and kudos to you. Ralph

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 7/3/2010 7:44:00 PM

Lol! You did it, and you thought you couldn't! ; )..... Congratulations on your win.

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 7/3/2010 9:12:00 AM

If your brain was on vacation when you wrote this ditty, then I can only imagine what it would have been like if you worked on it! Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2010 11:22:00 PM

Larry I am surprised you didn't win if only for saying all that funny stuff about her sister! Congrats, this was one of my favorites! LUv,Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2010 11:05:00 AM

Many congratulations Larry on your win in Nikko's contest with this gem >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/2/2010 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations Larry on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol

Tirzah Conway

Date: 7/2/2010 8:44:00 AM

Congrat's Larry on your well deserved win! I knew this one was a winner!~Tirzah~

Date: 7/2/2010 8:20:00 AM

Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/2/2010 7:39:00 AM

You almost got third, Larry!! just shy of one place-- hahaha and that' s because you called my sister a "villain"--kidding--honestly, it was because you didn't read my blog telling you about your typo in "villain"--kidding again--haha totally enjoyed reading that she's a villain, and my sister enjoyed reading this too--haha very clever and witty write you have here,great rhyme as well!! Congrats on your 4th place win ^_^ --nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2010 7:34:00 AM

Congrats Larry on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write without the letters m e and u as only Larry can do.. enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii ..AlohA... at 4 a.m..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2010 5:44:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Larry. Love, Carol

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/24/2010 9:06:00 PM

ha ha, great entry for Nikko's tricky challenge, enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)