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New Year Sunrise Premiere Contest Winner

Post-drought the winter dawning creeps across my coarse and brindled lawn, a molten ocean snail-like seeps and spreads its early morning yawn. A lambent thread it first appeared to rise and fall with rooftops' pitch. Across the frost it persevered, this aura of an angel which has fixed me to this gilded spot with silent prayers in misted breath, the fuchsia-ed clouds the sky's begot above a saffron-laureled wreath. The first of January wakes effulgent as the new year breaks.

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Date: 1/20/2018 2:42:00 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your well-earned win, Dale - blessings, my friend! :-)
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Date: 1/17/2018 11:15:00 AM
Wonderful work Dale, congratulations, most deserved...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/17/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Charlie, good to hear from you!
Date: 1/16/2018 7:05:00 AM
beautiful poem Dale congrats! :) -luloo
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/16/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thanks, Laura!
Date: 1/15/2018 6:35:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/15/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 1/15/2018 3:35:00 PM
You shine with this win..well deserved...congrats!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/15/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Vijay!
Date: 1/15/2018 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful, Dale, congratulations on an awesome win.. Hugs
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/15/2018 11:27:00 AM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 1/15/2018 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful, Dale, congratulations on an awesome win.. Hugs
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Date: 1/15/2018 10:32:00 AM
Quite a beauty! Congrats on your top premiere placement, Dale!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/15/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim! I'm really excited!
Date: 1/15/2018 10:25:00 AM
I KNEW it would be a winner for you Dale!!!!! Many congrats on your trophy win i am delighted for you:-) hugs jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/15/2018 10:41:00 AM
Thanks, Jan!!
Date: 1/15/2018 10:20:00 AM
Oh what imagery.. such beautiful words and description; congrats on your great win! I have read this thrice and love your sonnet :))
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/15/2018 10:25:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sneha!
Date: 12/25/2017 5:57:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, you make the morning come to life. Love it! Merry Christmas, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/25/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes. Merry Christmas to you, too!
Date: 12/25/2017 3:49:00 PM
A spectacular sonnet indeed Dale! Your imagery is breathtaking. I adore nature poems and this was such a joy to read this Christmas day! Merry Christmas to you and your family. xxoo ; )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/25/2017 5:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. Merry Christmas to you, too.
Date: 12/25/2017 8:55:00 AM
A delightful read--a beautiful sonnet--you are a master of this form!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/25/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Date: 12/24/2017 10:08:00 PM
A 'spectacular' and beautiful sonnet Dale that's abundant with delectable imagery that delights and enchants... so enjoyable! Warmest wishes.. Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 12/25/2017 9:30:00 AM
Merry Christmas to you Dale and those you love..
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/25/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/24/2017 6:34:00 PM
I knew your poem would be bursting with colourful imagery Dale and i was not disappointed!!! A joy to read this Christmas Day:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/24/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! I think I started over about ten times!

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