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New Year

Although you were near me I was looking for you Behind the trees, In the paddy fields, By the village pond's crystal shore Where in days of yore The pond shimmered. Then with gentle steps You came to fetch water Old melodies receded, leaving no records behind. Witnesses of your former charm have disappeared. How quickly time flew , how much the atmosphere has changed . Yet darling, hope persists in me. The New Year's promise remains in my mind.

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Date: 1/3/2025 3:48:00 AM
Yes. Hope always exists. New Year to appear with new prospects and old love to realise with new thrill. Wish you a very Happy New Year. Blessings
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/3/2025 7:43:00 AM
Thank you.Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 1/2/2025 8:34:00 AM
yes there is still hope, an lovely reading, thanks poet happy new year
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/2/2025 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 1/1/2025 6:01:00 AM
- A sensitive, poem Akham - Happy New Year ... with lots of cheer :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 1/1/2025 8:23:00 AM
Thank you.Wish you a happy New Year.
Date: 12/31/2024 8:16:00 PM
Yor first stanza resonates deeply within me. ~ Former resident of a small Middle East village. HNY, Akham ~ Gershon
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 12/31/2024 8:47:00 PM
Than you,Wish you a happy New Year
Date: 12/31/2024 10:30:00 AM
Such an interesting poem. Love your creative style.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 12/31/2024 5:33:00 PM
Thank you .Wishing you a happy New Year.

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