Never Rush to Perish

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November-22-2024

Traffic Safety Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Miranda Hawley

Be careful on the road, don’t rush in speed! In any case, the speed limit, you shouldn't exceed With caution, at every bend, you proceed To all traffic rules and guidelines, pay heed. Know well to what misery, reckless driving can lead Let your conscience never reproach you on a rash deed.

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Joe Dimino

Date: 11/24/2024 8:29:00 AM

Wise words: somethings are impossible to take back, whether guilt or grieving. Be mindful of others -- though distant, yet sisters and brothers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2024 10:40:00 PM

Excellent response to the sponsor's challenge, Valsa.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/23/2024 8:39:00 PM

This is good advice. I like how the meter expresses thought.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/23/2024 10:21:00 AM

wise words, valsa...road rage or carelessness shouldn't be the rules while wheeling ' with caution at every bend.' very nice!

Jay Narain

Date: 11/23/2024 9:54:00 AM

Good advice for drivers of all ages.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/23/2024 7:04:00 AM

It amazes me how some leave things until the last minute then rush putting themselves and other road users at a terrible risk. Good luck in the contest Valsa and hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2024 5:53:00 AM

- Follow the traffic rules and use common sense... great written, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/22/2024 11:12:00 PM

very important poem, we must drive carefully everywhere, anytime yann