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Never Enough

Newness of spring’s manifestation, efflorescing motifs of flowery guile, views of the gregarious vernal rev, eviscerating the macabre haste of time rapidly flittering as orange eye-thunder... Enlaced halcyon trees to ponder in a birdy glee No longer barren, they sing a gasconade silken Oh robin on your perch precarious, stay still so! Under the preeminent flurry of you, glowing petals snow my gazing... How fast your breast flashes by my lost breath (2/20/2021)

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Robert Pettit

Date: 3/4/2021 8:37:00 PM

I agree with what everyone else has said about your work.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/5/2021 11:12:00 AM

thank you, Robert :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2021 7:06:00 PM

you are so creative with your imagery, my friend. Great job here.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 2/28/2021 8:26:00 PM

thanks, Andrea :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 2/26/2021 11:36:00 AM

Hey Susan, thank you for stopping by my page. You have penned this poem quite well. Love the imagery... And your title is quite catchy as well. Brilliant write!... And I am truly amazed that you are interested in cricket... I was just watching a match, and we won.. Lol. Thanks for your wishes for Imran Khan, we wish the same. But fighting Mafia is always dangerous... U know. May God be with the good people. Ameen. Thank you! Stay blessed :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 2/27/2021 11:09:00 PM

Now cricket has changed a lot. We still have test and one day matches, but now we have T20 format as well. Just 20 overs. And it's fast as well.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 2/27/2021 10:09:00 AM

thank you! my dad's English and his parents used to watch the test matches that went on for days! I confess, I didn't have the patience to watch it all but would take in the highlights ... it's baseball here and I can't sit thru that either lol Two names I remember from those days are Ian Botham and Imran Khan... they kinda alliterate! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/24/2021 5:01:00 PM

Your imagery is breathtaking in this lovely tribute to springtime. :)

Susan Woodrow
Date: 2/24/2021 5:53:00 PM

thank you, Evelyn :)

John Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2021 10:21:00 AM

So interesting how even in a narrative you manage doing a double acrostic, I am always amazed by your talent!

Susan Woodrow
Date: 2/22/2021 9:05:00 AM

well, it's an extremely short narrative and double acrostics are my favorite addiction. Thank you John :)