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Neapolitan Delight

raspberry pink clouds sit above bright sunny day floats over rich dark earth ~*~ For PD's Neapolitan Haiku Contest in honor of Gwen Rix 10/2011 *9th Place

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/7/2012 3:15:00 PM

Nice way to describe the earth in vanilla, chocolate, and strawberry (or raspberry) flavors. Good write.

John Rhinem

Date: 11/20/2011 4:19:00 PM

Ps. Smile * The One's I Love * Always & Forever, John *

John Rhinem

Date: 11/19/2011 9:57:00 AM

Smileahhhyesssmyluvyessss

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 10/28/2011 6:36:00 PM

* “Owww * I Love This Neopolitans Moment * Sounds As A Paradises Moment My Dear Beautiful Annalise * As I Sooo Sincerely Said Unto Another The Other Day * I Adore Delicious Chocolate * Your Beauty Brushed A Very Enticing Portrait * Sooo Beautiful * Luv * Sarah.” *

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/21/2011 5:06:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Annalise. I hope we can talk when I get home. Congrats again on your win! Love, Carolyn

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/12/2011 5:52:00 PM

Makes me hungry! Richly descriptive! Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:03:00 PM

Hi Matt! I assume it's a rainy day for you too, but go treat yourself to some ice cream anyway! Peace and love back at you. Have a good day!

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/12/2011 3:16:00 PM

I think this unique piece May be just a "trifle rich...Annalise, oh do hope that was not heresy...trifle indeed:) anyway i think it may keep you up at night ingesting wise} hovever i totaly enjoyed it..and.......CONGRATULATIONS..!

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:00:00 PM

Haha! No worries, Joe. : ) I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for ingesting it at night, yes, I get into trouble but as long as it's none of that "Fat Free" stuff, I splurge every now and then; and a little pepto bismal helps LOL Thanks my friend!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2011 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:05:00 PM

Thank you dear Carol. Hope your day is going well!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 12:56:00 AM

Congrats Annalise on a top ten win with this yummy sweet treat of analogies..luv..

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:11:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I pray all is well. I don't visit too often but when I do I enjoy my favorites here and you are still one of them. Have a good day!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/6/2011 11:27:00 PM

Oh wow, Annalise. This was in honor ME? Wow. ....That Poet Destroyer, I'm gonna get her. hah ha. Capturing the essence of food and nature was somewhat difficult in my write. I tho't u rocked this one so well. I was envisioning a super clear sky on a sunny day...I would have to devour the rich dark earth first tho. lol. Congrats on such a awesome write. ----soup mail. Gwendolen

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:18:00 PM

Yes! The contest was sponsored in your honor by PD. That was really sweet of her. Glad you enjoyed this. After reading all the many Haikus I really need some ice cream! Thanks for the comment, my friend. Love, Annalise

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/6/2011 11:08:00 PM

Yummy Haiku, dear Annalise! Congrats too and thanks for your comments. Love, iolanda

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:21:00 PM

Thanks Iolanda. Hope your day is going well, God bless. Love, Annalise

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/6/2011 10:56:00 PM

Ah, beautiful poem, just love it Well done. Lee

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:27:00 PM

Thank you very much, Lee. I appreciate your kindness and taking the time to leave a comment for me. Hope your day is going well! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2011 1:54:00 PM

A true haiku with a neapolitan portrait of nature. Great write, Annalise. Congratulations and love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:15:00 PM

Thank you for your always genuine and kind comments Seafaress. I'm here today for a little while and trying to catch up with my PS "to do" list. Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2011 12:01:00 PM

DEAR ANNA~.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:20:00 PM

Thanks for the compliments, P.D. God bless you too. Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2011 12:38:00 AM

Great neapolitan nature theme, Annalise!! It has all the right ingredients!

Jl Sadberry

Date: 10/3/2011 6:57:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Hello My Dear Precious & Priceless Annalise! *^_^* What A Very Lovely & Picturesque Image Your Beauty Has Brushed Amid This Pretty Painting *^_^* A Reflection of Your Own Colourful & Tender Heart I Would Believe My Dear &, Sorry I Haven't Been By As of Late Yet, Here Am I *^_^* To Say Thank You, for Your Splendours Lovely Coms; Very Vanilla, Chocolate & Strawberry Sweet, My Dear!” === My Love Unto You Always & Forever, Jasper *

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:24:00 PM

Hey JL. Sorry I'm just getting to this but it's never too late to say "Thank you", my friend. I too am unable to come as often but when I do, you know that I go check out my favs first and you're one of them always. Hope you're doing well!? Love, Annalise

Jack Horne

Date: 10/1/2011 3:15:00 PM

lovely imagery, Annalise

Audrey Haick
Date: 10/13/2011 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Jack for your always, kind comments. Hope your day is going well. Love, Annalise