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My Winds of Victory

The color of wind changes Into the bliss sun today A new change of sight Tonight shall be the perfect night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/5/2011 9:43:00 PM
John, I enjoyed reading your poem here. Soupmail.
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:13:00 PM
You have penned very lovely thoughts on My winds of Victory. But will you please give once over to the syllable count if you mean it to be a haiku, John
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Date: 3/5/2011 2:52:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful place to be. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Karen
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