My Wife Lomet

My wife Lomet fell in love with a comet Hugged the Tuttle and fastened him to grommet Tuttle was tattler Snaky and rattler Lashed his tail in parabolic trail--kismet my wife lomet/limerick/copyright (c) rajat kanti chakrabarty 21 november 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/21/2014 9:43:00 AM

Very clever and creative, Rajat! Keep them coming...have a beautiful weekend! Hugs, Rhonda

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/21/2014 9:56:00 AM

Love Rhonda. Enjoy your weekend with fun frolic music anything you want.Take care XXXXXRAJAT

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/21/2014 9:42:00 AM

Very clever and creative, Rajat! Keep them coming...have a beautiful weekend! Hugs, Rhonda

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/21/2014 4:45:00 AM

Hi Rajat, Very cleverly crafted limerick. Very funny also. The parabolic trail tie in with allegorical, parable, "tale" (or story) and "tail" of a comet connection was interesting. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Have a great day. Earl

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/21/2014 5:10:00 AM

earl, thank you for your excellent comment.you have seen this poem from a new angle. great. highly appreciated.love.take care. fabulous weekend....RAJAT