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I intake oxygen from the green trees by the deep breaths..... I live under the sky Where thousands of star twinkle like the blinking of sweet young ladies telling you to love them..... I expel carbon-di-oxide in the air To make the trees green To make the sky blue And to make the ocean deep...... My sky is full of stars twinkling like the blinking of sweet young ladies......

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Date: 3/29/2014 4:15:00 PM
MOHAMMAD, Congratulations, In Giorgio's Impressing contest... Love ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 3/23/2014 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win with this awesome poem, mohammad
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Date: 3/22/2014 3:24:00 PM
this is so sweet. and now I remember I had loved it before as well. Congrats in Giorgio's contest.
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Date: 3/22/2014 3:06:00 PM
-Mohammad , congratulations on your fine winning poem X 2 in the contest: "February or March 2014 Poem" / / / / Sponsored by: Giorgio A. V. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2014 12:15:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Mohammad. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:49:00 AM
Impressive Mohammad, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Awesome and amazing win :) Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:59:00 AM
Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win,mohammad
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Date: 2/28/2014 8:50:00 AM
Congrats Abedin on the win . A brilliant one indeed.
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Date: 2/23/2014 6:25:00 PM
this is so precious. I Just love it!! a highest rating.
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Mohammad Abedin
Date: 2/23/2014 8:31:00 PM
Thanks for your so sweet comments.

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