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My Secret Soul

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This is my first attempt at tail-rhyme!

A meek Monet, a gentle Van Gogh I may seem too nice and mild, though The moon knows my true name In lust I ascend to claim my prey Goblins to gobble, dragons to slay New blood to tempt my game I brand the highest spruce with my mark I am as white as the night is dark Silent, floating prowl As encroaching dawn takes starlight's place Revealed beneath my human face Soul of snowy owl. 1/8/19

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2019 2:51:00 PM

and so it is... a fine win for you, michelle... big congrats!..huggs

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/13/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thank you, nette-

Eve Roper

Date: 2/2/2019 5:32:00 PM

Very good, Michelle, I enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/3/2019 12:25:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/1/2019 6:20:00 PM

Hello Michelle Faulkner, I like the way you created this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/1/2019 11:14:00 PM

Thank you for commenting on my poem, Darlene!

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/1/2019 6:03:00 AM

Very well written. Thoroughly enjoyed reading!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/1/2019 11:12:00 PM

Thank you, Valerie, for your kind comment!

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 1/30/2019 7:14:00 PM

Clever and captivating write, LOVE the ending! ;)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/1/2019 11:10:00 PM

Thanks, Rhona, much appreciated!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/17/2019 11:29:00 PM

A soulful poem Michelle, with imagination been at its most creative! I loved this poem, well done. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/18/2019 10:51:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Jennifer!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/9/2019 8:29:00 PM

I follow the leaders: A FAVE! Super-unbelievable! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/14/2019 5:01:00 PM

I'm so touched and flattered by your generous comment, gw!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/9/2019 7:16:00 AM

So lovely! Fave!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/9/2019 2:23:00 PM

Thank you, Kim, so glad you like it!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/9/2019 7:00:00 AM

Oh they are beautiful; I love the imagery that this poem paints; well done.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/9/2019 2:22:00 PM

I've always loved snowy owls - thanks for commenting!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2019 9:56:00 PM

I do not know if it's done right (Only did a few in my life) but I sure do love what you came up with!!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/8/2019 10:46:00 PM

I followed the form on this website, hope its done right - thanks, Andrea!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/8/2019 9:32:00 PM

I had to FAV this one. I am thinking I want to take it out and read it whenever I want. I just re-read it, and I may read it again before I finally fall asleep at my computer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 1/8/2019 10:44:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment, Caren! (soupmail..)