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My Real Name

My Real Name All I want from this life is that you know my real name, not the one my mother gave me in remembrance of no one she ever knew other than my father, but rather the one which says that I once lightly touched something divine, that I lived too long in the sticky pit of addiction, that I was a high-diver, easily piercing the membrane of reality, that I was once a magician, a weaver of incantations, the alchemist who found gold, that I danced with you among the eastern clouds on those fine mornings, my suit of light glowing yellow and orange and red, that I lay with you in the chocolate darkness of summer’s night, dew like starlight in your hair, that I was cloud-shadow flying up Yellowstone valley on cold mountain air, vanishing over the near horizon, and gone. That’s my name, all of it and more that I can’t recall. I know you will remember. 12.10.2013

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Date: 9/15/2024 4:48:00 PM
Very deep and meaningful poem I like it
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Date: 9/14/2024 10:38:00 AM
Poem that delves into our true essence. I'd rather a name than a number, especially if it wasn't 1. Besides, we women are no strangers to name changes. It just depends on who owns us. Lol. I really like this poem a lot. It depicts growth though adversity.
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Date: 10/21/2014 1:34:00 AM
Tremendous piece, Jack! You evoke so much feeling into your dialogue, free-verse and contemplative works. I believe that in Chinese culture people do actually change their names when something very significant changes in their lives... sounds like an awesome idea when you really think about it.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/21/2014 1:35:00 AM
Oh and a definite fave on my end :)
Date: 12/20/2013 3:37:00 PM
Jack,, "My Real Name" blew me away! For a moment I forgot mine! Stellar writing!! Merry Christmas, chuck
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Jack Jordan
Date: 12/20/2013 4:22:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Chuck, and Merry Christmas to you as well... Jack
Date: 12/16/2013 3:24:00 PM
WOW, this is awesome!!!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 12/16/2013 5:47:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I was eating chocolate at the time. It just seemed right... Jack
Date: 12/16/2013 3:24:00 PM
love the chocolate darkness line!!!
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Date: 12/10/2013 1:01:00 PM
I'm going to .... ..... I shall remember for eternity ... your name my friend - A beautiful poem Jack, like this really much!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 12/10/2013 1:08:00 PM
I am deeply appreciative of your comments, Anne-Lise. Thank you... Jack

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