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My Little Garden - Nk

weather turned cool light breezes from the pool chilled my heart made a spool at the sky a whirlpool of thoughts began all at once there was a cloudburst my little plants fell down making the whole sight worst would they flourish again? their heads almost submersed dawn came; I ran into the yard to see them first found them swaying with lovely smiles. PLACED : 2nd Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest Haiku poetry form only. Sponsored by: Charles Messina Syllable count : howmany syllables Date: 19-09-2022

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Date: 10/21/2022 2:02:00 PM
Ahh!! So sorry about the rain and fear of destruction to your plants but they were saved which is wonderful to hear. I wonder if things will get back to normal in hurricane ravished areas. Congratulations on this winner. Sara
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Date: 10/19/2022 9:53:00 AM
Illustrating the weather-conditions, flower-fall, swaying with lovely smiles... my little garden is beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2022 4:05:00 PM
I love this, Patri. The last line was perfect! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Great writing! Charlie
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/19/2022 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments!

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