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My Grandma's Getting Surgery

My Grandma's getting surgery My Grandpa's filled with joy For Grandma never left the house Because she's unemployed. Grandma was so nervous She didn't want to go But Grandpa on the other hand Is never left alone. Grandpa was so happy He shouted out with glee But when Grandma heard this She shot him in the knee Grandpa called the hospital They hurried without haste Before they even got there Grandma decked him in the face. When the ambulance got there To the hospital did they flee For it was now Grandpa Who was getting surgery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/25/2014 4:49:00 PM
Just read, I'm new to Poetry Soup Your poem made me laugh out loud! We need humor
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Date: 1/20/2010 12:28:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/19/2010 8:20:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:35:00 AM
Very witty poem, Daniel. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent clearly displayed with this one. Lainie
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:44:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Daniel. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2009 11:06:00 AM
Ho-ho-ho! This is sooo funny, Daniel! At least your grandma and grandpa didn't get "run over by a reindeer," as the song goes. You gave me a great laugh. Thank you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:56:00 AM
Dan i love it <3 haha this is one of the reasons you are my best friend. you are a great writer and you should keep writing
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:45:00 AM
Interesting write. I hope all in fun. Keep the humorous pen flowing. Sara
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