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For Anoucheka Gangabissoon's "In my deepest fantasies" poetry contest

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My deepest fantasies are high. Into the deep I would not go. In them, I'd soar with birds in sky and watch all things that are below. All on my own, I long to fly. My deepest fantasies are high. I’d drift with wind where I’d belong, and with wind's whispers, I would sigh. No revelries of wealth have I. I’d rather lift like a balloon. My deepest fantasies are high. Perhaps I’d even touch the moon! My body once again would be without its pain, and I’d feel spry while moving like a dream and free. My deepest fantasies are high.

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Date: 1/31/2025 7:02:00 AM
I agree. When you have a choice high is better. It's really an immense choice to make. Be well. Now that I think about it, I don't recall ever a negative scribble from you.
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Date: 1/30/2025 7:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. I really love this poem.
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Date: 1/22/2025 11:35:00 PM
Beautiful dreams, may your imagination fly with you. Good luck andrea.
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Date: 1/21/2025 5:54:00 PM
That's a nice clean fantasy Andrea. Loved reading.... Hugs...
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Date: 1/20/2025 10:26:00 AM
Free as a bird now that would be wonderful. xx
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Date: 1/20/2025 3:06:00 AM
- Sounds wonderful, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/19/2025 9:22:00 PM
Simple living but fantasies are high-very beautiful.
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Date: 1/19/2025 6:49:00 PM
A lovely big poetess longs to fly! Have wonderful dreams and days!
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Date: 1/19/2025 6:31:00 PM
I love what you say and how you achieved this form! Wonderful! Good luck in the contest Andrea!
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Date: 1/19/2025 4:00:00 PM
I can completely second your list of your deepest fantasies for myself. I think I might try this contest.
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Date: 1/19/2025 3:03:00 PM
It's a nice fantasy. Maybe you were a bird in a prior life, drifting where the wind whispers? I think you should try hang gliding :-)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/19/2025 3:31:00 PM
I really don't have deep desires. So I wrote my favorite dream. When I just go up in the sky and can make myself float to wherever I want!
Date: 1/19/2025 1:50:00 PM
Ah, enjoy it in the heights of poetry! Wishing your muse well <3
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Date: 1/19/2025 12:33:00 PM
Brilliant. Just love this. God bless you and may all your deepest fantasies come alive for you. Much love, Gina
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/19/2025 9:43:00 PM
Thanks, Gina
Date: 1/19/2025 12:08:00 PM
Oh to fly like a bird, wouldn't that be wonderful, the closest I've come to that was paragliding off a mountain and going up in a hot air balloon. Best of luck in the contest Andrea. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/19/2025 9:44:00 PM
Oh I would love paragliding. Never did it . I think I'd be chicken
Date: 1/19/2025 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful peaceful poem, love it
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/19/2025 9:45:00 PM
Thanks, Stephanie
Date: 1/19/2025 10:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Ending... I wish Good Health for you. "Good Luck" in the contest. Have a blessed day...................
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