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My Big Bath Tub

Delightful water Today I splashed-played and swam Mom said I was clean Date Written:5/29/2021 Note: A lake or the ocean can be a great and fun way to take a bath and get clean. Bite Size Poem 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Ruby Kelly

Date: 6/1/2021 11:07:00 AM

Love haikus but this one, in particular, is so cute! Love your work, Paula. - Ruby.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my splash-splash fun write. Have a blessed day.............

Paul Callus

Date: 6/1/2021 9:52:00 AM

This is so cute, Paula! I enjoy swimming, and the shower that follows...double washed double clean :) Warm regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Yes, you are double clean with your splash-splash and shower. Have a blessed day.............

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/30/2021 12:46:00 PM

Nothing beats a good splash splash Paula, Good luck in the contest, hope you are having a lovely weekend. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/1/2021 8:48:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my splash splash write. Have a blessed day.............

Ann Foster

Date: 5/30/2021 7:21:00 AM

Haha... wonderful... Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/30/2021 8:07:00 AM

Thanks, for writing. So glad I gave you a laugh. I love to give a laugh or smile. Have a blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/29/2021 9:28:00 PM

This delightful haiku brings a smile or three to the most jaded face, methinks. Love it, Paula. Good luck in the contest and Happy Sunday! :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/30/2021 8:06:00 AM

Thanks, for writing and for your good luck. So glad I gave you a smile. I love to give a smile. Have a blessed day.............