My Better Angels

The morning breeze 
whispers through window.
and a song plays in my head
again and again and again
while a new poem yet unmeasured stirs.

I ponder the many ways
to say love and affection.

My mind’s eye sees
glistening lakes and fields
the highways that take me away
and me back
here where I find my time and place.

The clothes dryer in the backroom hums
as I glance out the window.

Last night I saw a photo of my friend
of when she was a bride
and now she is divorced.
I ask myself
how I can make
someone as beautiful as she
happy again.

She returned to work
and I was drawn to her
the time when she asked 
if I was working the next day
as the night slipped away.

She was my happy birthday wish
growing more beautiful every day
and I was her valentine
the afternoon when
as she squeezed between
the time clock and me.

Someone else 
who’d seen us together 
said we were best friends

I showed my friend a story
and told her it was going
to be published in a magazine.
She said she was proud of me.

I showed her poems
and she read between the lines.

Now I realize
moments spent together
in the cosmetic aisle
and conversations in soft voices
were more than they seemed.

This morning as I awaken
my life comes back to me
as a bird outside my window sings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 6/15/2024 9:55:00 PM
I think I saw you writing of this girl in another poem. So are you two an item now. I hope so. You are such a a great guy
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