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mulberry trees and butterflies

channeling my thoughts towards earth star chakra I stand rooted feeling safe it is fall my thoughts linger around sadness like Monarch butterflies clustering on mulberry trees preparing for migration a thought here and there pass I mind my breath trance-like peace envelopes metamorphosis thoughts return, I see again, my mind sashays down glittered cluttered runway as always cycle begins

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/30/2025 6:28:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/31/2025 12:15:00 AM

Your visit and kind words means a blessing too dear pious friend. Thank you dear poet.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/29/2025 5:34:00 AM

… like Monarch butterflies clustering on mulberry trees… Congrats, Thriveni!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/31/2025 12:14:00 AM

Yeye, thank you dear friend for your kind visit and sweet words. Thank you dear poet.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 3/28/2025 9:37:00 PM

Congrats on your placement.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/31/2025 12:14:00 AM

Thank you dear friend for your precious time, kind visit and words. Thank you so much.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/28/2025 8:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this outstanding poem. It was a pleasure to read

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/31/2025 12:13:00 AM

I am delighted to read your sweet kind words dear poet, I am grateful to you for the kind visit and blessings too. thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/28/2025 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I love the Monarch butterflies the best. All are pretty. Spring Blessings To You.........

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/28/2025 8:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. They are pretty, yes. Thank you for the spring blessings dear friend. Many happiness to you too.

David Crandall

Date: 3/28/2025 11:32:00 AM

Great poem, beautifully worded. it seems like the migration cycle is a metaphor for your thought cycle.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/28/2025 8:19:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. yes it is, thank you very much.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/24/2025 11:56:00 AM

The turn of everything..The burn of knowledge Maybe we are 'unwilling to loose?' Too much When all is to gain.' Yet we seem entangled in The strain? How can I refrain.? Discern when Loss will change its name.' Good reading here Thriveni all blessings.'

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/25/2025 8:05:00 AM

Your kind visit with inimitable words brings me joy dear poet. Thank you for the blessings. means so much to me. Thank you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/22/2025 9:40:00 PM

Thriveni, this is a wonderful, masterfully written verse! Thank you for sharing this jewel of a poem. Best wishes. :)

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/23/2025 2:55:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your words means so much to me, fills me with joy. Thank you for the blessings. Thank you.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2025 6:45:00 AM

Dear poetic soul, This is so beautiful! The seamless flow of your words and how youv chosen words that go with the prompt on a spiritual level and more is so heart touching and moving! Impressive take! I especially love the way youv used metamorphosis and also the opening and ending in this! Best wishes always! Sending you light

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/23/2025 2:55:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. Your precious time and kind words means so much to me. Thank you very much.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2025 3:17:00 AM

So true. A cycle begins. That's the way life goes on.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/23/2025 2:54:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit and precious time dear poet. You say beautifully, 'That's the way of life'! Thank you very much dear poet.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/21/2025 7:58:00 PM

That was expressed so effectively. Outstanding work on the poem, Thriveni. I completely like it.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/22/2025 1:53:00 AM

I am grateful to you for your kind visit dear poet. I am elated to get this 'outstanding' from you sir. Thank you very much, thank you.

Lin Lane

Date: 3/21/2025 7:40:00 AM

Your lines kept me focused on the scene as if I was watching you from caterpillar into a beautiful Monarch, and watched you fly away.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/22/2025 1:51:00 AM

I am delighted by your kind visit and precious words dear poet. Thank you so much. You made my day, thank you for this joy.