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Mother's Christmas

MOTHER’S CHRISTMAS Christmas Day Work away Children play Dad asleep Not a peep Lazy creep Work complete Have a treat Sherry, sweet 20TH DECEMBER 2019 CHARLIEKU 3.3.3.CONTEST

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2019 1:50:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Sad to have to work on Christmas but some do in necessary occupations. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:46:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Bryn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 7:59:00 PM

Awesome, Bryn. I love how you rhymed each stanza. I love the 2nd stanza it made me LOL Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wish you a healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie

Bryn Strudwick
Date: 1/2/2019 9:57:00 AM

Thank you Charlie and a very prosperous and productive 2019 to you Bryn