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Mornings with Soup

coffee with cream cools with my incessant reading ‘cause The Soup is hot

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Fj Thomas

Date: 6/22/2024 9:19:00 PM

Lol a wonderful touch of wit ends a wonderful write! Nice one Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2024 5:48:00 AM

Thank you, FJ!

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 5/30/2024 6:05:00 PM

Sweet. Another senryu. Nice. (Oops, probably was s'pose to have taken a blind eye at this. MY APOLOGIES)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2024 5:44:00 AM

Thanks, Ben!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/30/2024 5:02:00 PM

I found your word play delightful. Is this for the 'soup' contest? If so, this is a creative take and a contender. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2024 5:44:00 AM

Yes! We will see!

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/30/2024 4:42:00 PM

Very nice Senryu!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2024 5:45:00 AM

Thank you, Abdullah!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2024 2:22:00 PM

I like this one with its play on words and ideas. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing and stopping by my page. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2024 2:26:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Deb M

Date: 5/30/2024 2:01:00 PM

Hehe creative and clever in only a few sentences Kim!! Debx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2024 2:27:00 PM

Thank you, Deb! :)

Paige Hind

Date: 5/30/2024 1:28:00 PM

Wow, I love this- how clever! <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2024 1:31:00 PM

Thanks so much! Hoping your having a great day!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2024 9:56:00 AM

What a fun Senryu write. This is so cute/so true... "Good Luck" Have A Fun Day Writing Away..........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2024 1:32:00 PM

Thankyou, my friend!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/30/2024 8:28:00 AM

Thanks for a catchy poem. Coffee sounds good.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2024 9:16:00 AM

There is truth in this poem…lol! Thank you! Have a cup, Hilda! Finally finished mine just before noon.