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Moor Top Blues

The chilled musty air tormented the aging stone, the wailing wind sang. © Harry J Horsman 1993

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2017 7:20:00 PM
Harry, such a wonderful haiku of beautiful imagery. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 3/22/2013 9:43:00 PM
Dear Harry, Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place well deserved Win in Rick's Contest and Congratulations on YOUR placement in P.D.'s Contest I LOVE Haiku (and Senryu) YOU are quite the Master of the Form. Please no offence but I call Raul Moreno the Sensei of Haiku YOU are defineitly 2nd in Command. Superb Write. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/18/2012 12:12:00 PM
beautiful once again...pd
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Date: 12/8/2012 7:13:00 PM
love the wailing sound it does not bother me... good haiku...pd
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Date: 5/11/2012 9:12:00 PM
hmmm, i searched all page 7 and I believe I saw all those. So next time I will try page six, my friend! Gotta hurry off here soon. have a great weekend.
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Date: 3/21/2012 4:08:00 PM
Nice haiku, Harry. Congrats on your HM in PD's contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/18/2012 5:23:00 PM
I see congratulations are in order again. btw, Harry, put your name always on a poem entered into PD's contests. She blogged about it last week. I bet you missed it when you were off for a while. I'm sure that is the only reason this did not place higher.
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:24:00 PM
congrats Harry luv on an HM for this brilliant Haiku my friend.. luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:56:00 PM
hey harry (I like saying that!) congrats on your win in the haiku contest; this is a perfect evocation of wild moorland :-)
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Mate. Outstanding. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. Best to you and yours. Thanks for you recent comments. Ralph
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:57:00 PM
HARRY, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 6/9/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest..nice, very, nice. BG
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:10:00 PM
GREAT imagery and congratulations!
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Date: 6/5/2010 6:00:00 AM
oh yes sorry missed this one congrats on win outstanding imagery tho sad also thansk for your kind comment on my work keep up the great writing enjoyed
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:10:00 AM
Congratulations Harry. Good imagery here, wild and barren...good one..Margaret
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:37:00 PM
This is great, congratulations.
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:34:00 PM
This is a perfect poem for all the senses! Congratulations on your second place win with this haiku!
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Date: 6/3/2010 6:25:00 AM
Great imagery in your Haiku, Harry!! Thank you for your kind comment on "Days" and have a great time...Gert
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:44:00 AM
just wanted to stop by and thank you for your comment:)
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Date: 6/2/2010 5:48:00 PM
I have been here..on the cliffs of Moher in Ireland. Good one! (Just leave off the periods...haiku's never have periods so the reader can envision the moment going on endlessly in time)
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:25:00 PM
Congrats Harry on your second place win in the Haiku You contest with this awesome write.. a wonderful victory and thankxxx for your sweet and special comments on my poetry yesterday ..had eye surgery so could not acknowledge immediately... enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:36:00 PM
Well done Harry, Im so glad to see you posting and being so successful. BG
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Date: 6/1/2010 4:17:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing! Karen
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