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Moon For Dinner

The night falls and me and a friend are having a walk He looks up the sky and says stare up high the moon looks ugly I look at it and think, then say: Someone ate the moon It seems so tasty but it makes you so wasty It look so cool but it makes you a fool As we dazzled up high we laughed with a cry A car comes by and we say good-bye But thank you God cause we didn't die I farted, he peed He cried, I screamed!! The man comes out, he wants to knock us out While he was swaying he was saying: What's this smell? The floor is so wet Why do you cry? As if your momma died We stand up saying as if we were playing: Shut up punk! Your momma's so fat! The cops come down asking what was down I ate the moon, I say like a fool He looked up strait and fell with a praise I felt like a God but I'm just a mod I go to the guy tell him he will die He punched me high making me fly My friend was a freak, he gave a big shriek Everyone left and I was left My friend gazed as he hold me strait And told me that I have to write that I said okay and you're so gay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/24/2011 7:42:00 AM
Nice Win Sami.....Congratulations, Judy
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:37:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Sami. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:42:00 AM
A big congratulations on your win Sami. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:56:00 AM
Coming back here to congratulate you Sami :) Enjoyed this poem-- way to go on your win :)
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:50:00 AM
Congrats Sami on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write .. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 5:05:00 AM
Oh wow! I didn't think that this poem would even be in the top 10... :S :D Happy I am to be :P
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:42:00 PM
hmmm, it sounds to me like someone was HIGH in this story. Congratulations. A very interesting poem and loved its title.
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Date: 2/21/2011 11:31:00 AM
Hi Sami :) Very interesting story you have here, your title caught my eye and that sure is a unique thing to say, eating the moon-- glad that everything was fine in the end and that you got inspired to write this - enjoyed reading this :D
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:26:00 AM
Thank you! I wrote this to my friend after a consequence of events... :P I am really glad you liked it.. Thank you
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Date: 2/20/2011 4:10:00 PM
What a poetic expressions on Moon for dinner, Sami
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