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Monday Mourning...........

Don't know how to speak To you get my point across Calm & soft don't work Maybe in the past "Itching" & screaming got thru To you now other Ways are much too quiet Perhaps you need to be slapped A bit to get it We're alike that way Care not to be corrected No matter the path Disturbing to be Wrong, off, bad, out of the loop Don't like it one bit If ugly screaming Is what it takes I fear I'm Not your gal at all Help me to help you Without any grief 'cause things Change most everyday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/13/2010 1:07:00 PM
Thnx for the kind comments, Kristi....much appreciated... Jimmy
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Date: 9/9/2010 1:37:00 PM
Been there, waking up with a day killer..lol,, what a bore and the arguements how ugly they got.. till one day i decided to change it everday by being happy. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:39:00 PM
Sounds like time to change men! Interesting haiku approach, Krist! Luv, andrea
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:54:00 PM
Nice thoughts well penned on Monday Mourning, kristi. Always with your multiple haikus
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Date: 8/30/2010 11:33:00 AM
uhoh--sounds like life around my neck of the woods. communicaton breakdown.
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