Moments Written

. Moments Sploshes of time One second here_one there Desires~needs~put on back burner Written

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Juanita Warden

Date: 7/11/2011 3:01:00 PM

I enjoyed this thought.

Audonus Taylor

Date: 7/10/2011 12:47:00 PM

Truly exceptional piece you have here. Great work

Jack Horne

Date: 7/10/2011 5:09:00 AM

Lovely thought provoking piece, Sara. Raymond Briggs and The Snowman are very famous here. It was originally a picture book without any words, but it was made into a 30 minute animated film and gets shown on TV every year on Xmas Eve. It's about a boy and his snowman that comes to life

Don Johnson

Date: 7/8/2011 3:28:00 PM

flows well babe, a poem is, the mental snare, thereis:) xo, Don

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2011 5:48:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Sara. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/7/2011 2:03:00 PM

A great thought, Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/7/2011 1:59:00 PM

This says to me life is a bit like a dot to dot puzzle..only with certain dots missing. Well written Sara..well conveyed.!

Judy Ball

Date: 7/7/2011 12:58:00 PM

In the hustle and bustle of every day living there are many desires that have to take a back seat to what is necessary right now. Ah such is life. God Bless, JB

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/7/2011 12:13:00 PM

wow so important these lines.. as we all do this Sara.. great words my friend.. time is a friend but sometimes such an enemy luv..