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Mix It Up a Bit

The garden traps sun Just as I trap the raincloud Rainbow recipe

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/10/2023 2:59:00 PM

Intriguing Senryu, Dilly. Nice job of making a rainbow. Bill

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/11/2023 12:57:00 AM

Thank you Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2023 7:46:00 AM

Very nice!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/8/2023 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2023 5:28:00 AM

now Dilly dally - as it's about nature are you sure this is a senryu and not a haiku lol:-) hugs jan xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/8/2023 7:49:00 AM

You have a naughty streak Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/8/2023 7:05:00 AM

Perhaps a twisted senryu could be your next contest theme

Jan Allison
Date: 6/8/2023 7:04:00 AM

If you say its a senryu its a SENRYU lol - am laughing my socks off here - write on Dilly:-) There is no dilly dallying with you my friend lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/8/2023 5:30:00 AM

I had the same thought Jan! I decided I was twisting nature for my own purpose so it's senyru...

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/8/2023 5:30:00 AM

Haha!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/8/2023 5:28:00 AM

just askin for a friend:-)