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Mitt's Lament

The oven timer’s going off. Oh crap! Before that, I was lying in the drawer enjoying a peaceful little nap. “She” grabs me and goes to the oven door. I’m held by her left hand, while in her right, my brother Terry – poor guy – she has got! Beneath our padding, we’re both filled with fright. She has not got a clue how that dang pot feels torturous against our faded skin. Our flesh, once bright red cloth, has grown so worn. Abusing us for all these years – a sin it ought to be! My brother’s getting torn from all our washings. God, I feel so lost. What happens once into the trash we’re tossed? Writtenh May 12, 2020 N/A in Potholder Contest judged 5/18/2020 Now used for John Hamilton's N-A Re-Run 8 Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/14/2020 11:27:00 AM
Great personification in this whimsical and fun write. Terry and Mitt, the OveGlove twins, such fun in your pen. I hope this does well in the potholder contest. I wonder how many people are going to write about holding "pot", haha! ~ John
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Date: 5/13/2020 4:25:00 PM
Funny I thought this was about Romney, you know Mitt kinda confusing but a cute write nonetheless!
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Date: 5/12/2020 9:43:00 PM
I read this just now. It explains the emotions of a potholder so vividly. "Beneath our padding, we’re both filled with fright"...that fear. This is lovely and creative. :)
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Date: 5/12/2020 8:45:00 PM
This is such a awesome write. I truly love it~!!!! It's a sure winner. Love and prayers always, Gina
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Date: 5/12/2020 8:35:00 PM
Mitt's always feeling the heat. Nicely done Andrea, best wishes
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/12/2020 11:44:00 PM
haha. Did you catch the name of my other potholder, Terry (for terry cloth?)
Date: 5/12/2020 8:17:00 PM
Hello Andrea … nice witty sonnet indeed Andrea. If our kitchen utensils could think, I'm certain this sonnet speaks for them all - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 5/12/2020 7:13:00 PM
Misleading title; I thought you were writing about Romney's pot .....Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/12/2020 6:20:00 PM
So, lol, we may be hovering beneath the same stars Andrea....just this morning I pledge to treat my precious brass hook in my kitchen with a handsome set of stove mitts before weeks end...awesome write dear poet...have a wonderful week...much live, james
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:27:00 PM
Poor mitt, ours is well scorched, at least nobody got burnt lol. Good luck Tom
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:01:00 PM
I enjoyed your personification poem.
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Date: 5/12/2020 4:49:00 PM
Love your interpretation! Frightened, tortured and tossed!
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