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Misty Clouds

'Twas a hot summer day When a cloud floated by In a stately pearl gray And a thousand feet high. How I wished, how I wished, I could meet it in the sky For I say, if I could I would float in a cloud If I could, then I would Have a cool, misty shroud. From above, from above, I would watch a world that's proud

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/3/2013 2:48:00 PM

I wish that I could just float around the sky with the clouds, and look down at the beauty below me. Very lovely piece of poetry here, Isaiah! I enjoyed it very much!....Thank you for commenting kindly on my poem, "The Shy Rose". And, thanks for responding to my soup mail....I have responded back to yours

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 9:05:00 AM

Lovely win...Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 11:35:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Very unique..Sara

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/27/2013 6:53:00 PM

maybe i should hitch a ride too Isaiah Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2013 9:05:00 AM

Oh.......love the last line especially, and the way you summed it up. Beautiful !!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/27/2013 12:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your place on the winners list Isaiah xx

Skat A

Date: 8/26/2013 8:31:00 PM

a wonderful win... ~Love ~~SKAT

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/26/2013 8:28:00 PM

Thank you for entering my contest..so glad to see your name pop up..congrats. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/15/2013 2:54:00 PM

It would be wonderful to float on cloud nine..and jump on a rainbow : )..Dreamy imagination..Very beautiful ..Everytime I see a cloud..Im gonna be thinking 'Mr I is up there floating proud : )