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Mist Hangs Her Body

mist hangs her body close to his softness blending early morning chill separated no longer hardness enters disappears (February 9, 2011 Wausau, Wisconsin (c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved

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Christine A Kysely

Date: 3/15/2011 1:53:00 PM

Thank you all so very much!!! My Internet hasn't been working so I have had no idea!!! OMG!!! Thank you!!! <3

Christine A Kysely

Date: 3/15/2011 1:52:00 PM

Thank you all so very much!!! My Internet hasn't been working so I have had no idea!!! OMG!!! Thank you!!! <3

George Aul

Date: 2/28/2011 10:42:00 AM

Congrats on your win.....George

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/25/2011 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest of Debbie, Christine

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Christine, in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/24/2011 4:58:00 PM

Dreamy...and meaningful (smile)..congrats on your win. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2011 7:03:00 AM

Congrats Christine on your great big win in the Japanese contest luv.. a super cool write ..enjoy with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Christine! Luv, Andrea

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/23/2011 9:09:00 PM

Many congrats Christine on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Kash Poet

Date: 2/23/2011 10:39:00 AM

Beautiful write Christine!Congrats on your big win in the contest of Debbie!!--kashinath

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2011 1:37:00 PM

I really really like this tanka ;) any chance you could enter my contest "We Aren't Japanese but Please.."[no title other than line 1 is necessary ex: ---mist hangs her body] capitalization is seldom used in japanese forms nor punctuation..this content is exactly what a lover would write back to the man who sent her a haiku!