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It was the day after the new year and there wasn't a peep The folks of Soup Creek were hungover and in a deep sleep The mayors annual meeting was to be held that afternoon And the venue was an upstairs room in Jenna's saloon. It had turned noon and all the council were now assembled there And they all bowed heads when they passed Milton's empty chair They went into the large meeting room and everybody sat down Then held a minute's silence for Milt a founding father of the Town. Tom outlined his plans for Soup Creek in the forthcoming year Everyone was in agreement and there was shouts of Hear, hear Sheriff Koplin spoke up and said we need to honour Milt's memory Saying "He was not one for fuss so maybe a plaque or a tree". Then Jenna tapped hard on the table and she stood up to speak Saying "Let's honour him properly and rename our town Milton Creek" The motion was passed and everyone present in the room agreed Ranger David said "Milt would be honoured and he'd be so pleased". Tom asked deputy Terry to get everyone assembled in the town square And added "Start with the bordello because you'll find many in there" Later, in the square Mayor Tom announced the news to the crowd "Jenna proposes we rename our town and we'd be doing Milt proud" . There were loud cheers and big smiles and everyone was happy That Milton Creek would be the towns new name for all eternity Anaya spoke up saying "For one day only the steaks are on me I'm renaming my steak house the' Big M' in Milton's memory". Meanwhile at Jenna's saloon Deb and Tania were busy preparing food Tonight, there was to be a party because everyone was in a good mood Then a stranger walked into the saloon and said "hi folks I've just got in I'm a very good friend of the saloon owner Jenna and my name is Lin" Lin worked for the Pinkerton agency and could handle a gun But she was on vacation and came to Milton Creek for some fun She knew how to handle vermin and lowlifes and knew how to kill Those that had tried to bushwack her are now lying in Boot Hill. Robert, Anaya's steak supplier could make anything out of wood And made a new town sign and placed it where the old one stood It was now late evening and townsfolk were heading for the saloon In the distance all you could hear were coyotes howling at the moon. Written on 5th January 2023. To honour Milton I'm changing the name of Soup Creek town to Milton Creek.

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Date: 1/30/2023 1:43:00 PM
Wow! An impressive poem. Brilliant. Milton Creek. Yes, Milton did a great job commenting on poems and motivating many, giving confidence. We will remember him and his encouragement. Best wishes. Tony
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Date: 1/30/2023 1:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Tony, Milt has certainly left a void on here as he was so supportive of his fellow poets. I couldn't think of a better way to honour him than name the town in his honour. Tom
Date: 1/15/2023 12:06:00 PM
Tom such a lovely Story line involving Milton. How did I miss this from you. I must have been sleep Walking. I think I read it but my comment did not go through. so sorry for lates response my friend. Milton would be proud to see your effort. Thanks for keeping him in our thoughts we need this from time to time. Reminders of our past friends. We keep them alive in our thoughts by your example. Have a lovely day my friend and thank you for your prayers for Harry...
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Date: 1/15/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you very much Michael, Milt certainly left a void when he passed, He loved being a part of the Soup Creek story and I couldn't think of a better way to honour him. I hope that Harry makes a good recovery. Tom
Date: 1/13/2023 9:46:00 AM
Tom, a great poem as always and nice that you have involved poetry soup people members as characters in your write. A very special tribute for Milton. Blessings to you my friend . Jennifer.
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Date: 1/13/2023 11:08:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, im sure Milton would approve of the name change for the town. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 1/12/2023 4:33:00 PM
Beautifully done and a darned good story; nice of you to rename the creek in Milt's honor.
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Date: 1/12/2023 9:40:00 PM
Thank you very much ML, I know Milt would have been chuffed to have the town named after him, he enjoyed being part of the Soup Creek story. Tom
Date: 1/10/2023 12:10:00 PM
Hear hear..'
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Date: 1/10/2023 12:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe, I know Milton would be chuffed naming our fictional town Milton Creek. Tom
Date: 1/9/2023 1:04:00 PM
Tom, you are such a story teller, wonderful poem, yes, Milton would be proud and happy, Constance
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Date: 1/9/2023 1:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance, I know he'd be honoured to have the town named after him. Tom
Date: 1/8/2023 10:49:00 AM
What a beautiful way to honour Milt with this special poem. I am sure he is smiling from above. love phyl
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Date: 1/8/2023 12:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Phyllis, Milt loved being gambler Milt in the Soup Creek story and I know he would have been honoured having the town named after him. He was so supportive of other poets on here and his passing has left a void on here. Tom
Date: 1/7/2023 5:56:00 PM
With all the other towns folk, I agree that it should be renamed "Milton Creek" I also like the fact that you made me a sign maker, as I actually prefer it to butcher Bob which has a rather stark connotation, I like cows. I'll be the meat supplier with a message, less red meat the better for you, eat more fish! See you in Milton Creek. I'm going by Wrangler Rob!
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Date: 1/8/2023 3:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Robert, Anaya is opening a Mexican restaurant so there will be some changes coming in future Writes. Tom
Date: 1/7/2023 9:24:00 AM
Hello Tom. You truly have a book on your hands with all these Soup Creek entries moments and scenes. This entry is a wonderful addition to the series and collection with more names that I recognize. PS. It was a nice writer's touch to end with coyotes howling to the moon. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent and continued series of Soup Creek. Have a wonderful weekend and may all remain safe and well within Soup Creek. Thank you. Blessings always.
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Date: 1/7/2023 9:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Lisa, I'm happy you enjoyed the continuing saga of what was Soup Creek, at a meeting of the town council it was decided to rename the town Milton Creek in honour of Milton. The stories will continue using the new name. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 1/7/2023 8:32:00 AM
Tom, a great tribute to Milt with the renaming of the town, best wishes
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Date: 1/7/2023 9:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph, I couldn't think of a better way to honour him, I'm sure he'd approve of the name change. Tom
Date: 1/7/2023 5:44:00 AM
A lovely honor tom and I am certain that Milt appreciates it for afar! Milt left big boots to fill and with this name change, his legacy lives on in the community! Happy Saturday!!
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Date: 1/7/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, im sure Milt's looking down and giving the thumbs up He enjoyed the soup Creek story and was chuffed to be part of it. Hope you too have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 1/6/2023 6:22:00 PM
Very well done, you have remembered it with great pride love and flair gl in the contest Tom
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:33:00 PM
Thank you very much Vie, I'm sure Milton is looking down with a big smile on his face. He loved being a part of the Soup Creek story. Tom
Date: 1/6/2023 1:04:00 PM
- Cheers to : Milton Creek ! - hugs
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Date: 1/6/2023 1:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne, it was a rush to get the new sign made and the new name made official in Milton's honour. Tom
Date: 1/6/2023 10:31:00 AM
Tom - Milt is certainly grinning his head off wherever he is. This is a fantastic tribute to him and your poem is just amazing! So glad you had this idea and carried it through…
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Ilene, I always saw Milt as one of the founding fathers of Soup Creek and what better way to honour him than name the town after him. Im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/6/2023 7:51:00 AM
Tom, you already know how much I'm pleased by this saga. Milton Creek it is and I don't think anyone will have reason to complain about the change. Your graphics are wonderful, and I know how long it must have taken you to complete them to your satisfaction, but also to write this one as no one but you can do. That said, there are a few who care as much as you do about our town, and bravo to them for doing that.
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Date: 1/6/2023 9:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Jenna, it was a pleasure to honour Milt naming our town after him. It's already catching on, have seen two other poems with reference to Milton Creek. One thing I know Milt would have loved it. Tom
Date: 1/6/2023 6:30:00 AM
Love it, Tom. Milt is smiling- I'm sure! Charlie
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Date: 1/6/2023 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlie, he loved being part of the Soup Creek story and I thought why not honour him in a big way and name the town in his honour. Tom
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Date: 1/6/2023 6:36:00 AM
Good news Charlie, Jenna is back in town.
Date: 1/6/2023 4:00:00 AM
Great honor that Soup Creek will here after be known as Milt Creek. A befitting honor to our departed friend, so beautifully written and so naturally rhyming, dear Tom!
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Date: 1/6/2023 4:24:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I know Milt would have been proud to have our town renamed in his honour. Tom
Date: 1/6/2023 2:53:00 AM
Glad about the change in name. Your tales are always pleasing to read. Great tribute to Milton.
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Date: 1/6/2023 3:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, I thought it would be a good way to keep his memory alive. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 1/6/2023 1:29:00 AM
So sweet! Milton would be very happy :) What an incredible tribute!
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Date: 1/6/2023 1:59:00 AM
Thank you very much BJ, I couldn't think of a better way than this to name the town in Milt's honour. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
Date: 1/5/2023 8:38:00 PM
A lovely tale and a wonderful tribute to Milt, Tom, surely he would have been pleased:)
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Date: 1/5/2023 11:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Jo, I agree, he enjoyed the tales of Soup Creek,I thought the name change would be a great way to keep his memory alive. Tom
Date: 1/5/2023 7:43:00 PM
Hear, hear!!! Milton Creek it will be! A fitting honor for a fine chap. Swell tale telling, TC. ;o]
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Date: 1/5/2023 11:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Arlo, Milt enjoyed being part of the saga and know he'd be pleased having the town named after him. Tom
Date: 1/5/2023 7:11:00 PM
Great poem/tale as per usual Tom. Milton Creek is a perfect name and a wonderful gesture…..really thoughtful! Debx
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Date: 1/5/2023 11:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Deb, im sure Milt would be honoured by all the wonderful tributes people have written about him. Tom
Date: 1/5/2023 7:02:00 PM
Marvellous Tom, and a wonderful memorial to Milt, he’d be so proud of the Creek’s new name and is so deserving of the fame… Belle
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Date: 1/5/2023 11:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Belle, he loved being a part of it and I'm sure he'd approve of it. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
Date: 1/5/2023 3:56:00 PM
Tom, a superb tribute, love the name change too! I am sure Milt would be pleased by this one! Thanks for including me as well! I hope to sing some memorial tunes at Jenna's Saloon in Milton Creek! A fav for me.
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Date: 1/5/2023 11:38:00 PM
Thank you very much Tania, I know Milt would be chuffed having a town named after him, imaginery or not. I couldnt think of a better way to honour him. Looking forward to it, the voice of an angel. Tom
Date: 1/5/2023 3:20:00 PM
Amen Tom, Milton Creek it is, the great man himself would be over the moon having a howl with the coyotes, A wonderful tribute to Milt, you put a lot of effort into this one, and got it bang on, so the saloon it is, just heard the cancan gals are on tonight, now we’re talking! cheers David
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Date: 1/5/2023 11:34:00 PM
Thank you very much David, wasn't sure if everyone would like the name change but everyone seems happy with it. Gonna be one hell of a party that's for sure Tom
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