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I savor sunshine - its voracious heat as I drizzle sweet lemonade on my dehydrated tongue. I dip my toes into the fondant of lemon afternoon. You’ll find me wading in the aquamarine swoon. My coral-colored swimsuit, one piece tease of a midsummer’s sea; saltine-salvation with a tangerine squeeze. Chartreuse eyes, like a key lime pie, Ray-Ban protected ~ * dessert winks at her sublime prize. Quite crimson, I become, forgetting to reapply sunscreen, with a rub-a-dub-dub,** as I sunbathe near my ocean tub. Clueless after hours on the beach, my love dives into his watermelon treat, a breach of spousal ethics to my cause. With a pouty lip and grifting-tears, I con his palm to soak me down with aloe vera, and grant me two-fisted cocktail sips. The saffron sun dips on the zephyr’d beach. A welcoming arm rounds my shoulders ~ lavender and lilac speech of twilight. 4/9/2021 Contest: Changing Colors Sponsor: Emile Pinet Required words are highlighted in bold letters Internal/End Rhymes 24 lines Ray-Ban — brand of sunglasses Rub-a-dub-dub — nursery rhyme

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Date: 4/16/2021 10:29:00 AM
Your poem has made the colors sound more amazing that well....just colors.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2021 6:20:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 4/14/2021 9:23:00 AM
Superb poetry and how you highlighted the scorching heat with with cool cocktail - very creative Kim. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer
Date: 4/10/2021 8:04:00 PM
Fascinating, gripping -- and delightful, Kim. Wonderful contest entry. Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon
Date: 4/10/2021 6:00:00 AM
You did this so well.. love the sunny and cool imagery... oh i cant wait for such days..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2021 10:37:00 AM
Ahh...right?! Thank you, my wonderful friend!
Date: 4/10/2021 5:27:00 AM
Oh, how delightful are the colors you painted with your words! Enjoyed the ride with you Kim. Loved your line: lavender and lilac speech of twilight.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Date: 4/10/2021 1:10:00 AM
Wondaful poem. How well you used those words. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor!
Date: 4/9/2021 10:31:00 PM
Great job putting the colors together in a fluid scene.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Juliet!
Date: 4/9/2021 9:05:00 PM
Totally delightful! Great writing!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 4/9/2021 8:33:00 PM
This is exquisite, Kim! The tantalizing colors and fantastic imagery are pure delight. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/10/2021 10:39:00 AM
Thank you always — to the brightest colors I know that flow from my dear Evelyn’s pen! You inspire me! xxoo

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