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Melancholy

I feel melancholy today, for Autumn has turned damp and cool. And the day wears a veil of grey as the children head back to school, trekking through mud and piles of crud. It is a wet, depressing day; a scarecrow stands out like a fool. And I fear Winter's on its way as dead leaves fill my empty pool; falling from trees, stripped with each breeze.

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Date: 9/24/2021 11:30:00 AM
The flip side of autumn joy is the pensive spirit it brings to the surface. Summer has left and we know winter approaches. Autumn is definitely transition - "tween" season. So nicely expressed Emile. Sending you a :)" to brighten your day, blessings for your melancholy heart and congratulations.
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, Sam, after reading your comment, I do feel less melancholy my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/22/2021 2:43:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:38:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/19/2021 11:03:00 AM
autumn gets me this way too, Emile. Love your depiction of that autumnal melancholy.
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Date: 9/19/2021 12:42:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, fall is a transition period and near the end, it gets pretty messy my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/19/2021 11:03:00 AM
And big congrats on the win!
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Date: 9/19/2021 12:41:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/18/2021 9:36:00 PM
Wonderful images of a "melancholy" sort of day. Nicely-written, Emile. I really enjoyed it, but I've been under the influence of pain pills all day. Had a tooth pulled and it is hurting where no tooth is. Can you beat that? Good poem for the contest. Best wishes.
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Date: 9/19/2021 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, I hope you are feeling better soon, I know how much pain a toothache can bring my friend, Emile.
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